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2/23/2003 c1 cb
pretty good, considering it's really short. the whole "SATAN THING" is kinda hard to follow though. cool twist at the end.
pretty good, considering it's really short. the whole "SATAN THING" is kinda hard to follow though. cool twist at the end.
2/18/2003 c1 
1Pam II
Go rOxton - he beat the Devil, thats pretty damn good! ;)
I loved the "what would the humidity do to my hair?" line. Great story, i loved it! :D
1Pam IIGo rOxton - he beat the Devil, thats pretty damn good! ;)
I loved the "what would the humidity do to my hair?" line. Great story, i loved it! :D
2/18/2003 c1 homemakr
Interesting story, Antea :) A black hole in the jungle floor - unique plot concept. I don't think I've seen that one anywhere else. I liked the three challenges you created, and Roxton's responses to them - Wow, he defeated the devil? You had me worried for a minute on the third one; I knew it had to be a continuation of the tests, but Roxton seemed confused about what to do at first. Marguerite, to her credit, was quite sure about what he should do, but it wouldn't have been at all in character for him to leave her. lol, I can just picture the faces of the others when Roxton and Marguerite appear in the midst of their camp so suddenly! and btw, ROFL at Marguerite's worry about what hell would do to her hair!
Interesting story, Antea :) A black hole in the jungle floor - unique plot concept. I don't think I've seen that one anywhere else. I liked the three challenges you created, and Roxton's responses to them - Wow, he defeated the devil? You had me worried for a minute on the third one; I knew it had to be a continuation of the tests, but Roxton seemed confused about what to do at first. Marguerite, to her credit, was quite sure about what he should do, but it wouldn't have been at all in character for him to leave her. lol, I can just picture the faces of the others when Roxton and Marguerite appear in the midst of their camp so suddenly! and btw, ROFL at Marguerite's worry about what hell would do to her hair!