for Cracks in the Foundation3/14/2017 c1 
10shebe67
I already know I'm sticking around for this one. It's so well written and you are spot on with the characters. You had me with the Rucas moment at the beginning only to have me screaming No at Cory. I especially love Lucas and Zay in this. I especially like that Shawn and Cory are there to support Stuart. Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't let those less than stellar comments get to you. You are a wonderful writer. I can eyes and see the scenes play out. Love it!
10shebe67I already know I'm sticking around for this one. It's so well written and you are spot on with the characters. You had me with the Rucas moment at the beginning only to have me screaming No at Cory. I especially love Lucas and Zay in this. I especially like that Shawn and Cory are there to support Stuart. Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't let those less than stellar comments get to you. You are a wonderful writer. I can eyes and see the scenes play out. Love it!
3/13/2017 c1 violet1429
You nearly had me going there with that opening scene! I got so excited and can probably relate to Lucas' disappointment that it was just a dream:)) The Zucas conversation made me laugh, especially because it seems like a conversation the would have. Zay doesn't seem like he would have never ending patience with the Riley talk XD You describe how Lucas feels about Riley very beautifully.
My heart really hurts for Riley. She's stuck in between a rock and a hard place. She doesn't know how to go about this situation without hurting either Lucas or Maya.
My heart also hurts for poor Farkle and the Minkus family. I get that reporter is doing her job but damn, how insensitive do you have to be to question the defendant's KID? It was nice to see Maya help and comfort him because we usually see Riley do that in most fics and Markle's friendship isn't always highlighted and you did a lovely job of that.
The Rucas moment was very cute and I like how you had him catch her, it kinda is their thing after all. Can't lie, Maya attempts to poke fun at Lucas as per usual had me cringing. Especially that "one girlfriend isn't enough for you" bit. I know she is trying to go on as normal but poor Riley having to go along with it. Can't be easy.
Cory and Shawn both being there to support Stuart really warmed my heart. Like he said, they weren't all that close but look how far they've come!
Really excited to see where you take all of this!(:
You nearly had me going there with that opening scene! I got so excited and can probably relate to Lucas' disappointment that it was just a dream:)) The Zucas conversation made me laugh, especially because it seems like a conversation the would have. Zay doesn't seem like he would have never ending patience with the Riley talk XD You describe how Lucas feels about Riley very beautifully.
My heart really hurts for Riley. She's stuck in between a rock and a hard place. She doesn't know how to go about this situation without hurting either Lucas or Maya.
My heart also hurts for poor Farkle and the Minkus family. I get that reporter is doing her job but damn, how insensitive do you have to be to question the defendant's KID? It was nice to see Maya help and comfort him because we usually see Riley do that in most fics and Markle's friendship isn't always highlighted and you did a lovely job of that.
The Rucas moment was very cute and I like how you had him catch her, it kinda is their thing after all. Can't lie, Maya attempts to poke fun at Lucas as per usual had me cringing. Especially that "one girlfriend isn't enough for you" bit. I know she is trying to go on as normal but poor Riley having to go along with it. Can't be easy.
Cory and Shawn both being there to support Stuart really warmed my heart. Like he said, they weren't all that close but look how far they've come!
Really excited to see where you take all of this!(:
3/13/2017 c1 Guest
This is great! I was a big fan of forgiveness project and I'm sure you won't disappoint with this one.
This is great! I was a big fan of forgiveness project and I'm sure you won't disappoint with this one.
3/13/2017 c1 Guest
Great start to the story! Waiting patiently for update for this one and your others.
Great start to the story! Waiting patiently for update for this one and your others.
3/13/2017 c1 Sanchezashley
I like your other story but the thing I don't like is that there was just too much narrating and i found myself skipping a lot of it... also the whole triangle thing is getting pretty boring...
I like your other story but the thing I don't like is that there was just too much narrating and i found myself skipping a lot of it... also the whole triangle thing is getting pretty boring...
3/10/2017 c1 9BlueBell765
How do you do it!? I love, love, LOVE your characterizations! Every character is always SO in character, I can really picture them saying and doing these things in every chapter of every story you write! My heart goes out to all of the kids! What an adult situation to be in at such a young age! Keep up the good work!
9BlueBell765How do you do it!? I love, love, LOVE your characterizations! Every character is always SO in character, I can really picture them saying and doing these things in every chapter of every story you write! My heart goes out to all of the kids! What an adult situation to be in at such a young age! Keep up the good work!
3/10/2017 c1 Siennese
Looking forward to continuing the wild ride on the Clique Six Rollercoaster. Im afan of your writing and the stories you tellof these great characters.
Im so glad I was in middle/HS 30 years ago.I know I wouldn't be able to survivethe teen angst of the Millennium.
As always, Keep writing, I'll keep reading and hopefully be better at reviewing.
Looking forward to continuing the wild ride on the Clique Six Rollercoaster. Im afan of your writing and the stories you tellof these great characters.
Im so glad I was in middle/HS 30 years ago.I know I wouldn't be able to survivethe teen angst of the Millennium.
As always, Keep writing, I'll keep reading and hopefully be better at reviewing.
3/10/2017 c1 53Rose Garden Twilight
Wow what a great start for the story. You got me with the dream, I laughed at the conversation between Zay and Lucas. Although both Riley and Lucas had their own thoughts on how it would be they saw each other, I still liked that Lucas caught her on the courthouse. It was sweet. Also love the markle interaction, I watch law and order (almost too much so lol). I'm in for the ride and can't wait to see what comes of part two. Beautiful chapter.
53Rose Garden TwilightWow what a great start for the story. You got me with the dream, I laughed at the conversation between Zay and Lucas. Although both Riley and Lucas had their own thoughts on how it would be they saw each other, I still liked that Lucas caught her on the courthouse. It was sweet. Also love the markle interaction, I watch law and order (almost too much so lol). I'm in for the ride and can't wait to see what comes of part two. Beautiful chapter.
3/10/2017 c1 Guest
Great start!
I'm sure I'll love this as much as FP
Great start!
I'm sure I'll love this as much as FP