for Blackbird4/16 c1 Fanny Bennet
Oh my gosh...I don't know if I can go through this again... I cried when I read the original.
Oh my gosh...I don't know if I can go through this again... I cried when I read the original.
4/9 c1 smrb
Oh my goodness, what a coincidence. I read both of your stories a couple of years ago and thought I'd try to find them again and see your update just this month about making revisions. I very much look forward to reading them as I have to say, eternity especially had one of the most powerful endings I've read.
Oh my goodness, what a coincidence. I read both of your stories a couple of years ago and thought I'd try to find them again and see your update just this month about making revisions. I very much look forward to reading them as I have to say, eternity especially had one of the most powerful endings I've read.
8/6/2022 c1 Guest
What happened to this story?"
What happened to this story?"
4/15/2022 c1 QueenRhaella
I honestly love this story and can't wait to see your revision! This was my first PoTO fic that I truly adored :)
I honestly love this story and can't wait to see your revision! This was my first PoTO fic that I truly adored :)
7/19/2021 c50 
27CharlieBoneFan
Holy crap that was a long story! You did a fantastic job, although I will admit to disappointment in your character death, but what reader wants to read that anyway. Anyhow, your story was amazing and I didn't want to stop reading, but in my opinion in did lull a little bit in the times you had the time jumping parts when they were just living their happy domestic lives with years rolling by, but otherwise it was great!
27CharlieBoneFanHoly crap that was a long story! You did a fantastic job, although I will admit to disappointment in your character death, but what reader wants to read that anyway. Anyhow, your story was amazing and I didn't want to stop reading, but in my opinion in did lull a little bit in the times you had the time jumping parts when they were just living their happy domestic lives with years rolling by, but otherwise it was great!
7/15/2021 c50 Phantomgirl24
Great story!
Great story!
7/13/2021 c50 82Starwatcher2018
Congratulations. It was a long journey I know - having your own baby in the middle of it all. I hope you feel a great sense of satisfaction. This was quite an undertaking and you pulled it off.
82Starwatcher2018Congratulations. It was a long journey I know - having your own baby in the middle of it all. I hope you feel a great sense of satisfaction. This was quite an undertaking and you pulled it off.
6/12/2021 c47 Fanny Bennet
This is some of the most depressing story telling I've read in a long time. Not that it's not well done, because it is. But damn. I had to go read some fluffy nonsense to recover.
This is some of the most depressing story telling I've read in a long time. Not that it's not well done, because it is. But damn. I had to go read some fluffy nonsense to recover.
6/12/2021 c47 EJaysMoon
Have I just sobbed my way through this entire chapter? Perhaps.
The way this is written is so devastatingly realnot just this chapter, the whole narrative voice, whether that’s Erik or Christine, throughout the story is so believable.
It’s so beautiful, yet so heartbreaking.
Have I just sobbed my way through this entire chapter? Perhaps.
The way this is written is so devastatingly realnot just this chapter, the whole narrative voice, whether that’s Erik or Christine, throughout the story is so believable.
It’s so beautiful, yet so heartbreaking.
5/4/2021 c46 Phantomgirl24
Oh my goodness! Why Christine? Just when they were so happy. Poor little Josie and poor, poor Erik. Please let this just be an awful dream he is having and needs to wake up from. Oh my!
Oh my goodness! Why Christine? Just when they were so happy. Poor little Josie and poor, poor Erik. Please let this just be an awful dream he is having and needs to wake up from. Oh my!
5/4/2021 c46 Huhhhh
Why did you do that? Omg ma baby Erik
Why did you do that? Omg ma baby Erik
5/4/2021 c46 8FleshofMidnight
This is so beautifully written and just heartbreaking! She can't be gone!
8FleshofMidnightThis is so beautifully written and just heartbreaking! She can't be gone!
5/4/2021 c46 Fanny Bennet
That did not end the way I hoped it would. I only hope that Erik will hold it together to be the parent Josie needs.
That did not end the way I hoped it would. I only hope that Erik will hold it together to be the parent Josie needs.