for You Have But Two Choices9/2/2018 c31 silverspetz
Very, VERY good. I'm not generally a fan of stories that try to be dark with Ichigo going on revenge sprees or whatnot, but you make it work by taking a lot of time to build up the conflict between Hueco Mundo and Soul Society. I still can't say that I'm a fan of beloved characters dropping dead left and right everywhere now that the war has started but I can appreciate what you are going for and like I said, you make it work. You also have a rather breezy style of writing that is easy to take in and follow. It never gets somber and completely depressing and I especially love some of the more humorous elements. Ichigo and Chad criticizing Aizen's impractical numbering-system was a highlight.
Shame this hasn't been updated in so long. With 30 chapters released between March and January you must have had very frequent updates before simply stopping. Any particular reason for that or have you just had very hectic semester?
Very, VERY good. I'm not generally a fan of stories that try to be dark with Ichigo going on revenge sprees or whatnot, but you make it work by taking a lot of time to build up the conflict between Hueco Mundo and Soul Society. I still can't say that I'm a fan of beloved characters dropping dead left and right everywhere now that the war has started but I can appreciate what you are going for and like I said, you make it work. You also have a rather breezy style of writing that is easy to take in and follow. It never gets somber and completely depressing and I especially love some of the more humorous elements. Ichigo and Chad criticizing Aizen's impractical numbering-system was a highlight.
Shame this hasn't been updated in so long. With 30 chapters released between March and January you must have had very frequent updates before simply stopping. Any particular reason for that or have you just had very hectic semester?
2/5/2018 c31 
62Stormshadow13
Wow. I’m glad you to go sisters are out of the fight now. And are safe. Lots of battles I’m sad grinch outside. Honestly I have to say I’m rooting for the hollows.
62Stormshadow13Wow. I’m glad you to go sisters are out of the fight now. And are safe. Lots of battles I’m sad grinch outside. Honestly I have to say I’m rooting for the hollows.
2/4/2018 c9 Matemeo3
Even though it's a mute point (me being on chapter 9 out of 31), I'm not enjoying the singularly aesthetic usage of the hollow form. It may align with what you want Ichigo to represent at this stage, but in my eyes is like someone mocking a focal point from the actual series. That's about the only major complaint I have. The rest up to this point has been enjoyable, if a little fast paced.
Even though it's a mute point (me being on chapter 9 out of 31), I'm not enjoying the singularly aesthetic usage of the hollow form. It may align with what you want Ichigo to represent at this stage, but in my eyes is like someone mocking a focal point from the actual series. That's about the only major complaint I have. The rest up to this point has been enjoyable, if a little fast paced.
1/28/2018 c31 Guest
To quite the Malkavian Mod for Deus Ex: "Slaughter, slaughter, slaughter - he's dead!"
To quite the Malkavian Mod for Deus Ex: "Slaughter, slaughter, slaughter - he's dead!"
1/28/2018 c31 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Man oh man! There’s going to be LOTS of chaos now! Makes me wonder what with all the deaths, will Ichigo be able to make more Arrancar in the future since he’s losing so many?
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkMan oh man! There’s going to be LOTS of chaos now! Makes me wonder what with all the deaths, will Ichigo be able to make more Arrancar in the future since he’s losing so many?
1/28/2018 c31 12Harbinger Of Kaos
Given the deaths are fairly violent for the most part than I feel M is the rating to go.
12Harbinger Of KaosGiven the deaths are fairly violent for the most part than I feel M is the rating to go.
1/28/2018 c31 2BrazeRancor
Old man Yama comin’ in to level the playing field. Probably more flatten than level however.
2BrazeRancorOld man Yama comin’ in to level the playing field. Probably more flatten than level however.
1/26/2018 c30 11Astroman1000
Damn, you really keep the anticipation high.
Can’t wait til the next chapter
Thx ;)
11Astroman1000Damn, you really keep the anticipation high.
Can’t wait til the next chapter
Thx ;)
1/18/2018 c30 Jostanos
"ROUND 2! FIGHT!" ~ Random Announcer(s) from fighting games.
Both sides have wounded and dead comrades.
The Kefka (FFVI reference) wannabe is going to... Keh heh.. use your imagination and or wait until next chapter. :)
"ROUND 2! FIGHT!" ~ Random Announcer(s) from fighting games.
Both sides have wounded and dead comrades.
The Kefka (FFVI reference) wannabe is going to... Keh heh.. use your imagination and or wait until next chapter. :)
1/18/2018 c30 Umbrardor
You ought to put a tragedy tag, this is looking to be a really cool, but terrible tragedy.
Thanks for the chapter!
You ought to put a tragedy tag, this is looking to be a really cool, but terrible tragedy.
Thanks for the chapter!
1/18/2018 c30 3vanillanemo
Adlfyeusnddhsi where to begin? There’s so much happening at once! Rangiku is out and safe, which is great, but shes definitely going to be pissed at Gin - how many of her men will die because she isnt there to provide backup? Shunsui vs Chad round two is exciting! It’ll be great to have a reference of just how much Chads improved by putting him back up against his original opponent.
Tosens just insane... its really quite sad. But Byakuya better be on the lookout! Especially since he’s still injured.
This is great, keep up the good work!
3vanillanemoAdlfyeusnddhsi where to begin? There’s so much happening at once! Rangiku is out and safe, which is great, but shes definitely going to be pissed at Gin - how many of her men will die because she isnt there to provide backup? Shunsui vs Chad round two is exciting! It’ll be great to have a reference of just how much Chads improved by putting him back up against his original opponent.
Tosens just insane... its really quite sad. But Byakuya better be on the lookout! Especially since he’s still injured.
This is great, keep up the good work!