for The unsociable Dragon (On Hold)11/14/2020 c7 MidnightAmbush
I absolutely love this story! I was wondering if you could make Akashi loyal to Issei maybe because she likes him better or he will produce stronger babies than Vali or something. I only like when the MC has lovers so I really hope you don't give Vali or any of the other guys lovers. Anyway, I think this is an amazing story so I hope you continue, even though it's been over a year since you updated it :)
I absolutely love this story! I was wondering if you could make Akashi loyal to Issei maybe because she likes him better or he will produce stronger babies than Vali or something. I only like when the MC has lovers so I really hope you don't give Vali or any of the other guys lovers. Anyway, I think this is an amazing story so I hope you continue, even though it's been over a year since you updated it :)
18/19/2019 c1 Guest
I don't get why some people say such rude things can't they just enjoy it and I think its great there are some things that could be improved on but we all learn writing skills as time moves forward
PS do you think you could add one lemon with the the chainsaw twins just a possibility if you happen to hit writers block to stall for time if you need to finish or start on a new chapter
Keep calm
And
Stay sane
I don't get why some people say such rude things can't they just enjoy it and I think its great there are some things that could be improved on but we all learn writing skills as time moves forward
PS do you think you could add one lemon with the the chainsaw twins just a possibility if you happen to hit writers block to stall for time if you need to finish or start on a new chapter
Keep calm
And
Stay sane
8/19/2019 c1 Guest
I don't get why some people say such rude things can't they just enjoy it and I think its great there are some things that could be improved on but we all learn writing skills as time moves forward
PS do you think you could add one lemon with the the chainsaw twins just a possibility if you happen to hit writers block to stall for time if you need to finish or start on a new chapter
Keep calm
And
Stay sane
I don't get why some people say such rude things can't they just enjoy it and I think its great there are some things that could be improved on but we all learn writing skills as time moves forward
PS do you think you could add one lemon with the the chainsaw twins just a possibility if you happen to hit writers block to stall for time if you need to finish or start on a new chapter
Keep calm
And
Stay sane
7/21/2019 c7 Guest
Not going to lie here dude but I think if you want to make a story on this site & draw in readers you need to scrap all your unfinished ones. There is no point starting multiple stories to then scrap them or leave them dead on the water after the 3rd or even 2nd chapter. If you really want to make a story of your own work then putt passion into it & stick with, plan ahead in your story, ask for ideas, make the reader feel involved in a story that you create because I’ve seen reviews on your stories & people aren’t getting the plot or characterisation within those stories and being a reader of some of your stories it is a let down when you start up an interesting story with a good title that draws people in to then realise I see your name as the author & instantly loosing interest as you just don’t take stories far or finish.
I may be harsh with my review bur it’s my honest opinion & hope you do take my advice given & for whatever story you do next I just hope it lasts.
Not going to lie here dude but I think if you want to make a story on this site & draw in readers you need to scrap all your unfinished ones. There is no point starting multiple stories to then scrap them or leave them dead on the water after the 3rd or even 2nd chapter. If you really want to make a story of your own work then putt passion into it & stick with, plan ahead in your story, ask for ideas, make the reader feel involved in a story that you create because I’ve seen reviews on your stories & people aren’t getting the plot or characterisation within those stories and being a reader of some of your stories it is a let down when you start up an interesting story with a good title that draws people in to then realise I see your name as the author & instantly loosing interest as you just don’t take stories far or finish.
I may be harsh with my review bur it’s my honest opinion & hope you do take my advice given & for whatever story you do next I just hope it lasts.
8/30/2018 c7 Guest
Seriously is Akashi gonna be a gag harem character since she wants both Issei and Valid? Or will she realize "love" later on or something, maybe Vali turns out to be a girl and just kept the disguise up for a long time in fear of his grandfather trying breed her.
Seriously is Akashi gonna be a gag harem character since she wants both Issei and Valid? Or will she realize "love" later on or something, maybe Vali turns out to be a girl and just kept the disguise up for a long time in fear of his grandfather trying breed her.
8/30/2018 c3 Guest
So does that mean akashi is in both Issei and Vali'd Harem? You didn't really clear that up
So does that mean akashi is in both Issei and Vali'd Harem? You didn't really clear that up
8/30/2018 c2 Guest
Why didn't Issei beat up Riser, or challenge Vali when he needed him alive? Why is he such a passive bitch in this story man, he's a dragon and they have pride but you seem to still put him into a passive side bitch character not a sleeping dragon.
Why didn't Issei beat up Riser, or challenge Vali when he needed him alive? Why is he such a passive bitch in this story man, he's a dragon and they have pride but you seem to still put him into a passive side bitch character not a sleeping dragon.
8/26/2018 c7 darth56
this is 1 of your story's that i do hope you will keep writing as it is a very good read keep going thanks
this is 1 of your story's that i do hope you will keep writing as it is a very good read keep going thanks
2/17/2018 c6 Guest
chapter 7 please
chapter 7 please