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1/14 c11 Guest
They have the confession from Henry so all they need is the cops to hear the story and Hayden whole story will fall apart
1/14 c11 Guest
This whole getting arrested and going to jail thing is highly Over Exaggerated.
1/11 c7 Guest
Wow within the same day?! Know if only the cops acted like this in the real world
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12/12/2018 c30 Periwinkle Party
Hm... not sure this is going to end well for Joe's face...

As a student of mental health first aid and psychology and also as a person who suffers frequent panic attacks I feel something off reading about Joe's panic attacks. Now, when my issues started I would be confused (because I repressed the reasons I was having problems) and it was easier to get out of panic. Now that I remember most of it waking up is harder. Whatever is happening around me is playing some role in my visions from the past, including my sister asking what's wrong. People can talk to and shake me but it won't work. You portray this with Henry but not with Joe. Perhaps I just find it odd or maybe Henry fakes the attacks with Joe around for comfort... but I could be wrong about Joe since I'm still younger than him and probably you. Maybe he deals with his life better than me. Who knows. Wish your writing well!
12/8/2018 c11 Periwinkle Party
Wow... Hayden is written so well... he reminds me of my Grandfather. He acts all sweet but is a very evil man. Met him twice. I cried with thankfulness the last time which was two months ago at my sister's wedding because my friend (who's a boy, and my escort for the night) stuck by me and kept the man from threatening me and being creepy and getting his face torn off by me because I'm cool like that. My friend? He's my Joe. (-)
10/11/2018 c7 10Supermikeyninjalady
Oh man! This is getting bad! I hope Joe will be able to hug frank before he’s taken in
10/11/2018 c6 Supermikeyninjalady
Oh no the creep lives on the same street as Henry? That’s really bad
10/11/2018 c5 Supermikeyninjalady
Oh nooo! Oh man this idiot sickhead screwed up by messing with franks little bro. I wonder how poor joe is going to react when he finds out about charges being pressed
10/11/2018 c4 Supermikeyninjalady
Aww that was a nice moment between Joe and his father
10/11/2018 c3 Supermikeyninjalady
Oh man. I wonder why Joe is hiding stuff from Frank? Is he scared? Or still hiding something?
10/11/2018 c2 Supermikeyninjalady
Holy hell. Stupid principal is obviously hiding something. As for Frank holding Joe and calming him down... AWWWWWWWWWWWW I love brotherly fluff especially when it's Frank comforting his little bro
10/11/2018 c1 Supermikeyninjalady
oh man! what an intense and amazing start! Joe baby, you have to tell your big bro about this.
5/15/2018 c20 Guest
In America, if the victim of a domestic violence case is unwilling to press charges, the state will so the assailant will go to jail
4/19/2018 c32 Berenicka
First of all I'd like to thank you, for this story (and sorry for mistakes in my english, I'm not native speaker)
I like Hardy boys very much, it's one of my favorites books since my childhood and I like this kind of story, so thanks for this.
During my reading I have so much ideas and feelings in my minds about heroes and development of the plot, so it was very exiting because there is a detective line and a lot of Hardy family (which wan't enough for me in original books) and I love family story very much.
But for me, for my understanding of the characters - Frank and Joe are more strong (mentally) people, I don't know how to explain it in English right, well for example - I think Frank suffered too much (emotional I mean) after happening in Hyden's basement (not about Joe, about himself - it could be if Fenton wants to beat him, because he is his father and this is hard, but Hyden his enemy - for my mind this situation should have been angry him, but not surfer about beating him. Because a lot of different criminals try to do the worst things for him - like to try kill him and Joe, and he experienced it more easily. So I try to say that I understand that this case for brothers is more personalities than others, but I imagine them like people with more strong emotional side of their characters, more emotionally stable.
But I didn't read Casefiles, so may be I'm wrong
And I want to say I'm so happy that Frank go to Prinston, I always want a good education for brothers and want them to live their own life without following Fanton's steps. Because this is not a that kind of live which you can wish for smb who you like, for my mind
So thank you for this story and I look forward to the continuation of the sequel
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