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for The Hardy Boys: Pressure Series (rewritten)

3/17/2017 c1 14Cherylann Rivers
Yay! I'm excited to see you writing and it's great you're reworking the story. Love that. The opening lines here were great. I don't normally picture Joe in this situation, but you make it seem realistic. I hope Joe does decide to tellFrank, who I love in big brother mode here. It's also good that Joe regrets "going off on him." Good intro!
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