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10/11/2018 c3 10Supermikeyninjalady
Oh man. I wonder why Joe is hiding stuff from Frank? Is he scared? Or still hiding something?
10/11/2018 c2 Supermikeyninjalady
Holy hell. Stupid principal is obviously hiding something. As for Frank holding Joe and calming him down... AWWWWWWWWWWWW I love brotherly fluff especially when it's Frank comforting his little bro
10/11/2018 c1 Supermikeyninjalady
oh man! what an intense and amazing start! Joe baby, you have to tell your big bro about this.
5/15/2018 c20 Guest
In America, if the victim of a domestic violence case is unwilling to press charges, the state will so the assailant will go to jail
4/19/2018 c32 Berenicka
First of all I'd like to thank you, for this story (and sorry for mistakes in my english, I'm not native speaker)
I like Hardy boys very much, it's one of my favorites books since my childhood and I like this kind of story, so thanks for this.
During my reading I have so much ideas and feelings in my minds about heroes and development of the plot, so it was very exiting because there is a detective line and a lot of Hardy family (which wan't enough for me in original books) and I love family story very much.
But for me, for my understanding of the characters - Frank and Joe are more strong (mentally) people, I don't know how to explain it in English right, well for example - I think Frank suffered too much (emotional I mean) after happening in Hyden's basement (not about Joe, about himself - it could be if Fenton wants to beat him, because he is his father and this is hard, but Hyden his enemy - for my mind this situation should have been angry him, but not surfer about beating him. Because a lot of different criminals try to do the worst things for him - like to try kill him and Joe, and he experienced it more easily. So I try to say that I understand that this case for brothers is more personalities than others, but I imagine them like people with more strong emotional side of their characters, more emotionally stable.
But I didn't read Casefiles, so may be I'm wrong
And I want to say I'm so happy that Frank go to Prinston, I always want a good education for brothers and want them to live their own life without following Fanton's steps. Because this is not a that kind of live which you can wish for smb who you like, for my mind
So thank you for this story and I look forward to the continuation of the sequel
4/15/2018 c32 converse6485
After Hayden had the boys at his house I was on Joe's side about Henry but now I'm more on franks side to be honest it is creepy and a bit obsessive how Henry acts with Joe wanting only to be around him seeing him as his superhero and then dying his hair blond like Joe's.

Can't wait to find out what happens with Joe.
4/14/2018 c32 nancy drew 11
There's nothing not to love in your story.
4/12/2018 c32 John Quest
This was great, thanks for the mention, not necessary.
3/28/2018 c1 Highflyer
I just finished the last few chapters and YAS! The moment I was waiting for is written so beautifully! Loved Frank/Callie. Always have.
I am also quite excited to see what will happen now. Where is Joe?
3/28/2018 c32 Whiskey Lullaby 1864
I cannot wait. Such a great story.
3/28/2018 c32 Rose2425
Wow, a story cliffhanger, nice going...I cannot wait for the next story!
3/28/2018 c32 Robin's Egg
I love the intrigue
3/27/2018 c32 6nicolelylewis
Aw man! Freaking Hayden!
3/26/2018 c32 Tinee Dancer
Fantastic chapter. I loved it
3/26/2018 c32 14Cherylann Rivers
WOW. Congratulations on the completion of this heck of a story, and what a perfect lead in to the next one. Hayden is out of his mind— I can’t believe what he did to Duke. Even worse, if he could do that to Duke, what can he do to Joe? *Bites nails anxiously waiting for the next story*

Henry does seem obsessed with Joe and I’m worried that Joe is defending a kid who has the same issues as his dad, though they would not be his fault. I’m still on the fence with him!

My favorite part was with Frank and Callie. What a lovely scene... honest, sweet, romantic, and authentic. I’m so glad that Frank opened up and that Callie supported him totally (and found it sexy!). They’re a strong couple and I hope that you’ll find some time in the next story to develop their relationship. I mean, hey... they could always gets engaged (for no reason other than it’d make me happy- haha).

Thanks for sharing your ideas and this story. It’s been a pleasure to read and I look forward to the next one. Well done! :)
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