for Pressure (rewritten)2/5/2018 c29 Guest
Great chapter I am loving this story. Can't wait to see what happens next! please keep going ! :)
Great chapter I am loving this story. Can't wait to see what happens next! please keep going ! :)
2/2/2018 c29 
14Cherylann Rivers
Great update! I especially like how Frank can be honest with Biff and Chet about his reservations about Henry. He needs their support, and he can’t really get into it with Henry (I’m not sure of what to make of Henry, either). The superhero element is fun, because somehow it can be either inspiring or creepy in the context in which you use it. So... now you need to answer all of the questions! Will there be a trial? Will Frank finally tell Callie how he feels?! (I hope so!). How will this whole scenario play out- and is Henry a victim or a sociopath... or both?! Love it!
14Cherylann RiversGreat update! I especially like how Frank can be honest with Biff and Chet about his reservations about Henry. He needs their support, and he can’t really get into it with Henry (I’m not sure of what to make of Henry, either). The superhero element is fun, because somehow it can be either inspiring or creepy in the context in which you use it. So... now you need to answer all of the questions! Will there be a trial? Will Frank finally tell Callie how he feels?! (I hope so!). How will this whole scenario play out- and is Henry a victim or a sociopath... or both?! Love it!
1/27/2018 c25 Paulina Ann
Definitely a lot of intense things going on here. Poor boys. All that anger. I think they need more than decompression. They need an outlet. A physical one.
Definitely a lot of intense things going on here. Poor boys. All that anger. I think they need more than decompression. They need an outlet. A physical one.
1/27/2018 c20 Paulina Ann
I really liked the talk between Joe and Frank. The whole 's no am I' questioning was very appropriate.
I really liked the talk between Joe and Frank. The whole 's no am I' questioning was very appropriate.
1/27/2018 c19 Paulina Ann
I really liked the talk between Frank and Joe about their individual identities. Nice touch.
I really liked the talk between Frank and Joe about their individual identities. Nice touch.
1/26/2018 c15 Paulina Ann
Hmmm, I'm not sure how this is going to turn out. Poor Joe and his anxiety!
Hmmm, I'm not sure how this is going to turn out. Poor Joe and his anxiety!