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2/5/2018 c29 Guest
Great chapter I am loving this story. Can't wait to see what happens next! please keep going ! :)
2/4/2018 c29 nancy drew 11
Really good chapter.
2/2/2018 c29 14Cherylann Rivers
Great update! I especially like how Frank can be honest with Biff and Chet about his reservations about Henry. He needs their support, and he can’t really get into it with Henry (I’m not sure of what to make of Henry, either). The superhero element is fun, because somehow it can be either inspiring or creepy in the context in which you use it. So... now you need to answer all of the questions! Will there be a trial? Will Frank finally tell Callie how he feels?! (I hope so!). How will this whole scenario play out- and is Henry a victim or a sociopath... or both?! Love it!
1/28/2018 c28 78Paulina Ann
I was surprised at the Morton's but I have to say it's a perfect fit. :)
1/27/2018 c26 Paulina Ann
Whew! So glad they worked that out!
1/27/2018 c25 Paulina Ann
Definitely a lot of intense things going on here. Poor boys. All that anger. I think they need more than decompression. They need an outlet. A physical one.
1/27/2018 c24 Paulina Ann
I think they both sound fine. :)
1/27/2018 c22 Paulina Ann
That was some intense therapy.
1/27/2018 c21 Paulina Ann
Quite the anxious chapter!
1/27/2018 c20 Paulina Ann
I really liked the talk between Joe and Frank. The whole 's no am I' questioning was very appropriate.
1/27/2018 c19 Paulina Ann
I really liked the talk between Frank and Joe about their individual identities. Nice touch.
1/27/2018 c18 Paulina Ann
That was an intense chapter. I can't imagine the rats! Ack!
1/26/2018 c16 Paulina Ann
Now I know it is a bad idea!
1/26/2018 c15 Paulina Ann
Hmmm, I'm not sure how this is going to turn out. Poor Joe and his anxiety!
1/25/2018 c13 Paulina Ann
I did like the lock pick in the shoe. :)
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