for The Hardy Boys: Pressure Series (rewritten)9/28/2017 c23 Guest
Great chapter again! Keep on writing!
Great chapter again! Keep on writing!
9/28/2017 c23 
14Cherylann Rivers
Good talk with the doctor in this chapter. I'm glad that Joe was able to receive some clarification about hwnry, though I'm honestly more with Frank on this one. I don't know how to feel about the Superman drawing, either! Certainly, no matter which path he takes, Henry has a long road ahead of him, and I hope that Joe does not take the fall for him. I wonder what Frank's Princeton plan will be. Looking forward to the next chapter!
14Cherylann RiversGood talk with the doctor in this chapter. I'm glad that Joe was able to receive some clarification about hwnry, though I'm honestly more with Frank on this one. I don't know how to feel about the Superman drawing, either! Certainly, no matter which path he takes, Henry has a long road ahead of him, and I hope that Joe does not take the fall for him. I wonder what Frank's Princeton plan will be. Looking forward to the next chapter!
9/27/2017 c22 Guest
great chapter! keep going
great chapter! keep going
9/27/2017 c22 Cherylann Rivers
Joe's rage is understandable and the concept of forgiveness isn't an easy one under the best of circumstances. Even though Joe lashed out at Frank, hopefully it got him to open up and realize that he needs help. Your counselor speaks with good experience and advice... I just hope that the boys both will heed her words. I'm glad you got this chapter up. Looking forward to seeing about how Frank handles all this in the next chapter!
Joe's rage is understandable and the concept of forgiveness isn't an easy one under the best of circumstances. Even though Joe lashed out at Frank, hopefully it got him to open up and realize that he needs help. Your counselor speaks with good experience and advice... I just hope that the boys both will heed her words. I'm glad you got this chapter up. Looking forward to seeing about how Frank handles all this in the next chapter!
9/24/2017 c21 84Icylightning
Sorry for not reviewing early chapters but I swear I am still reading allll of them when you update! This chapter was excellent too. Joe showing his emotions to Frank on how he feels about him leaving and Frank saying he loves callie were all nice read. I am excited about Joe meeting Henry! Can't wait to read next chapter! Keep up your fabulous work :-)))
84IcylightningSorry for not reviewing early chapters but I swear I am still reading allll of them when you update! This chapter was excellent too. Joe showing his emotions to Frank on how he feels about him leaving and Frank saying he loves callie were all nice read. I am excited about Joe meeting Henry! Can't wait to read next chapter! Keep up your fabulous work :-)))
9/21/2017 c20 Guest
Great chapter! please update regularly can't wait to see what happens next.
Great chapter! please update regularly can't wait to see what happens next.
9/21/2017 c21 14Cherylann Rivers
Love that Fenton thought up a way to trap the boys into talking. They both need that right now, especially Joe, who is having these terrible panic attacks. You do a nice job of showing Joe's opinion that Henry is to be trusted against Frank's view that he is not. I tend to side a little more with Frank here, just to be cautious. Joe has so many things going on and it probably is too soon to see Henry. He's dealing with Frank leaving and his own trauma, physical and emotional. And Frank is also dealing with both issues and the need to protect Joe and the sudden realization that he loves Callie a lot and now has to tell her about Princeton and leaving her. I hope that she understands and supports him, and that Frank can open up to her fully emotionally. He'll need to be really open and vulnerable with her if they're going to get stronger and start to plan long term to be together. And hopefully Callie and Joe will get along as well. Very nice chapter! Looking forward to the next one already!
14Cherylann RiversLove that Fenton thought up a way to trap the boys into talking. They both need that right now, especially Joe, who is having these terrible panic attacks. You do a nice job of showing Joe's opinion that Henry is to be trusted against Frank's view that he is not. I tend to side a little more with Frank here, just to be cautious. Joe has so many things going on and it probably is too soon to see Henry. He's dealing with Frank leaving and his own trauma, physical and emotional. And Frank is also dealing with both issues and the need to protect Joe and the sudden realization that he loves Callie a lot and now has to tell her about Princeton and leaving her. I hope that she understands and supports him, and that Frank can open up to her fully emotionally. He'll need to be really open and vulnerable with her if they're going to get stronger and start to plan long term to be together. And hopefully Callie and Joe will get along as well. Very nice chapter! Looking forward to the next one already!
9/4/2017 c20 84Icylightning
Wow! So many emotions are there in this chapter! Laura worried for her sons. Fenton being protective. Joe "trying" to show he is cool with Frank leaving him and Frank thinking should he really leave? Aaah...Frank dont you ever leave your little brother alone. He is a magnet to troubles...who will save him!
Please post soon. Loving this so much :-)))
84IcylightningWow! So many emotions are there in this chapter! Laura worried for her sons. Fenton being protective. Joe "trying" to show he is cool with Frank leaving him and Frank thinking should he really leave? Aaah...Frank dont you ever leave your little brother alone. He is a magnet to troubles...who will save him!
Please post soon. Loving this so much :-)))
8/25/2017 c20 rebeccareneesharplake
can u add a few more chapter like does frank really go to princeton? does mr hayden and his brother get their just dessert of jail?is henry going to be ok? please update
can u add a few more chapter like does frank really go to princeton? does mr hayden and his brother get their just dessert of jail?is henry going to be ok? please update
8/22/2017 c20 14Cherylann Rivers
This chapter was great. You're doing a nice job of divining the action sequences and building suspense. Poor Laura is worried about her family and I do hope that Fenton can protect them. The Hayden family seems to have so much suffering and so many secrets-itllbw interesting to see where you take that. Finally, Frank at Princeton- wow. He went there in my story, too. What a smarty pants! Lol. I'm concerned that him leaving will leave Joe vulnerable. I'm also really, really hoping that Frank and Callie make it work and that he is open with his love for her. Maybe she will join him?! Looking forward to the next update!
14Cherylann RiversThis chapter was great. You're doing a nice job of divining the action sequences and building suspense. Poor Laura is worried about her family and I do hope that Fenton can protect them. The Hayden family seems to have so much suffering and so many secrets-itllbw interesting to see where you take that. Finally, Frank at Princeton- wow. He went there in my story, too. What a smarty pants! Lol. I'm concerned that him leaving will leave Joe vulnerable. I'm also really, really hoping that Frank and Callie make it work and that he is open with his love for her. Maybe she will join him?! Looking forward to the next update!
8/22/2017 c20 Guest
This is really good. Very intense stuff happening with Joe and Frank, Fenton and Laura. It worries me to what the bad guys are planning. Can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
This is really good. Very intense stuff happening with Joe and Frank, Fenton and Laura. It worries me to what the bad guys are planning. Can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
8/19/2017 c19 Guest
Awesome chapter please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! :-)
Awesome chapter please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! :-)