
6/23 c2
30DalkonCledwin
I don’t think “commandeered the broom” was the right turn of phrase for what you were trying to say.

I don’t think “commandeered the broom” was the right turn of phrase for what you were trying to say.
6/22 c1 DalkonCledwin
I should have realized the instant you said this was a three way cross between Potterverse, FFVII and Nasuverse that at least one of the elements you’d be including from Nasuverse is the Clocktower Bat.
You are regularly missing one of the E’s in the word “Weasley.”
Spell name is “Aguamenti”, not “Aguamendi.”
I should have realized the instant you said this was a three way cross between Potterverse, FFVII and Nasuverse that at least one of the elements you’d be including from Nasuverse is the Clocktower Bat.
You are regularly missing one of the E’s in the word “Weasley.”
Spell name is “Aguamenti”, not “Aguamendi.”
5/7 c6 InfinityMask
I wonder what this would mean to Tifa. She probably would dislike her father and other villagers.
I wonder what this would mean to Tifa. She probably would dislike her father and other villagers.
5/7 c3 InfinityMask
I wonder what happened if she goes to Bleach world. Would shinigami follow her command?
Would hedwig gain human form?
I wonder what happened if she goes to Bleach world. Would shinigami follow her command?
Would hedwig gain human form?
5/7 c2 InfinityMask
I think sje would get along with Angeal. Genesis... a bit too arrogant. Sephiroth... she would sympathize with him.
I think sje would get along with Angeal. Genesis... a bit too arrogant. Sephiroth... she would sympathize with him.
4/22 c33
13Zoran Dawn-Eclipse
I'm getting the feeling that Bella might have become her own Vortex with how people keep finding her.
And all the floating. This makes me wish I could float.
Great work!

I'm getting the feeling that Bella might have become her own Vortex with how people keep finding her.
And all the floating. This makes me wish I could float.
Great work!
4/18 c33 Wishfull-star
That was breathtaking I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
That was breathtaking I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)