10/21/2024 c5 wandamarie
loving the story thank you

10/21/2024 c2 wandamarie
thank you

5/20/2024 c4 not a fan
This is huge nonsense, so the only Malfoy is not the Malfoy heir, Dean is the Black heir instead of Harry (the worst thing) and who knows what else will happen?

Let's see if I understand, Sirius, not being Lord Black, does not have a will to name Harry as his heir, an illegitimate son became Lord Black and now Fabian and Gideon do make a will? I don't think you know how anything works, it honestly doesn't make sense that in some things you use blood inheritance and in others a will, for exactly the same things... what a way to ruin this

seriously "heir ship" instead of "heirship" at least write it correctly damn... the same with "lord ship" instead of "lordship"

So Lucius has a squib brother expelled from the family but his children can still inherit? What idiocy, if they expel you from the family your descendants are expelled and that's it.

many holes in the plot that end without any explanation... terrible

10/26/2023 c6 wandamarie
thank you for the story so far

10/26/2023 c4 wandamarie
thank you

10/26/2023 c3 wandamarie
wow

10/26/2023 c1 wandamarie
thank you