for Lady Luck10/13/2018 c30 Guest
Please keep updating, this story is so good
Please keep updating, this story is so good
4/17/2018 c29 Ultimatrix bearer
Neo set chess free? Interesting. I sense a back story coming up.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
Neo set chess free? Interesting. I sense a back story coming up.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
3/28/2018 c27 Guest
Love it keep it up.
Love it keep it up.
3/28/2018 c27 Multifandoms45
Yay you’ve returned! I originally read your story as a guest and just recently made an account, love your story
Yay you’ve returned! I originally read your story as a guest and just recently made an account, love your story
2/4/2018 c26 Slc
Keep ruby n chess at least so 2nd choice but don't let chess die like ever or I'll be really disappointed with your writing and I hope chess reveals her past to at least ruby soon she diserves to know with how she puts up with her drinking and disappearing acts just my thoughts on this see you in the next chapter when ever that is peace.
Keep ruby n chess at least so 2nd choice but don't let chess die like ever or I'll be really disappointed with your writing and I hope chess reveals her past to at least ruby soon she diserves to know with how she puts up with her drinking and disappearing acts just my thoughts on this see you in the next chapter when ever that is peace.
2/4/2018 c15 Slc
What about red queen 4 the ship name eh eh.?
What about red queen 4 the ship name eh eh.?
1/2/2018 c26 Treefrogger
A mix of one and two; have the characters live for a while and then after that MORE EVIL
A mix of one and two; have the characters live for a while and then after that MORE EVIL
11/14/2017 c26 
15Allison Illuminated
Definently the second option is better, but I say go with your gut and your character. I loved it! Especially that first description of Chess, "twisted demented steampunk" is such a mood.
15Allison IlluminatedDefinently the second option is better, but I say go with your gut and your character. I loved it! Especially that first description of Chess, "twisted demented steampunk" is such a mood.
11/8/2017 c26 1SilverHollow5
Idk maybe chess almost died but dosent so I guess the everyone lives ending idk might wanna put drama though and don't overwork yerself
1SilverHollow5Idk maybe chess almost died but dosent so I guess the everyone lives ending idk might wanna put drama though and don't overwork yerself