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8/10/2023 c1 1IbisFighter
cringe nazi
12/1/2017 c1 Guest
write more
10/13/2017 c1 18Empty Promise
...What is this? Its barely an outline let alone a story,, and you keep ruining the little immersion you have with the authors notes. The point of writing is to describe things to the reader because they CAN NOT see them, you skip around most of the important details and more or less ruin your chance at people getting a interest in the world (Which i will mention doesn't seem to reflect the book or series, which has a major subplot on the cold war that was quickly forming between the Japanese and Germans),
I feel as through you need to heavily rethink this story, and maybe write it fully.
I was harsh, but this deserved it/
10/6/2017 c1 anonymous
Please update soon.
4/29/2017 c1 yoshika with lucy 9999
when the next chapter
4/1/2017 c1 25Jokun
Yes! Rose Knights! Hopefully more Piña in this story.
3/25/2017 c1 Guest
For the fatherland!
3/24/2017 c1 Guest
An interesting story, I will have to keep an eye on this.
3/24/2017 c1 Guest
Panzers forward!
3/23/2017 c1 Random guy
I can imagine the panzer divisions rolling across the plains of falmart as the soldiers sing Panzerlied.
3/23/2017 c1 Guest
I can see it now, panzer and tiger tanks rolling across the plains of fallmart as the empires troops flee for their lives while the German tankers sing Panzerlied.
3/23/2017 c1 26Cyricist001
I would love to see more.

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