for Red Riding Hood's Big Bad Grimm3/24/2017 c1 Guest
I can't wait for hte actual episodes
this one was a blast
I can't wait for hte actual episodes
this one was a blast
3/23/2017 c1 Guest
Not bad, at all. But, do us all a favor and kick the narrator out, would ya? :)
Not bad, at all. But, do us all a favor and kick the narrator out, would ya? :)
3/23/2017 c1 Labir
I really love reading this fanfiction! It was so much fun. I love how you ended this chapter. I hope you continue this!
I really love reading this fanfiction! It was so much fun. I love how you ended this chapter. I hope you continue this!
3/23/2017 c1 
1RemnantSoul
I enjoyed it, this is a neat concept that I haven't seen in a while. The only thing I can recommend is "less narrator," (it does provide nice comic relief), but I feel that it disrupts the flow of the story. However this is your story and I would still read this story regardless. Keep up the good work. :)
1RemnantSoulI enjoyed it, this is a neat concept that I haven't seen in a while. The only thing I can recommend is "less narrator," (it does provide nice comic relief), but I feel that it disrupts the flow of the story. However this is your story and I would still read this story regardless. Keep up the good work. :)
3/23/2017 c1 Fallenmoonz
This sounds really interesting you should continue it also maybe change how the Grimm became sentient just a little bit so it doesn't sound like yang makes Grimm sentient then murders them
This sounds really interesting you should continue it also maybe change how the Grimm became sentient just a little bit so it doesn't sound like yang makes Grimm sentient then murders them