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4/15/2017 c1 Guest
good
3/31/2017 c2 Angela3000
I definitely like where this is going and I see that you're making the cryogenic process more realistic than some other authors I've read thus far. The only small little kinks you have to work out are the small spelling mistakes and the dialogue but besides those two things you don't hear any complaints from me. Can't wait for next update!
3/29/2017 c2 3goruden
Woooooaaaa!

I'm waiting to learn more about Nadia, how she's going to turn around in this new world with Aloy. I imagine the same comes for Aloy, for her to find out more about the world of the Old ones and of Elisabet herself by the words of the new friend.

I hope they can make GAIA work again! *-*

I loved it! Please continue!
3/25/2017 c2 Le Chasseur
Interesting start. Horizon Zero Dawn is a excellent game with a captivating storyline, and it seems that this fiction is following its lead !

So, another AI after Aloy, or rather, Nadia who is with Aloy. But, considering the redhead, she will most certainly become a priority target sooner rather than later !
3/25/2017 c2 canonman89
This chapter is spectacular! I hope they get in the Nora mountain. Keep it up.
3/25/2017 c1 Angela Lara
THIS IS GREAT. KEEP AT IT!
3/24/2017 c1 canonman89
Wow! This chapter is amazing! I hope odine meets aloy. Keep up the great work.
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