for The Ghost's Story6/1/2017 c1 ThePirateDinosaur
Hey, I like this story so far. Red Skull is my favorite Marvel character (Besides Loki). Your English is near perfect, and I only noticed one or two things that aren't even worth mentioning- just some past and present tense issues on singular words. I really hope you continue the story though. I couldn't really care about tiny Grammer issues, so even with them it's enjoyable!
Hey, I like this story so far. Red Skull is my favorite Marvel character (Besides Loki). Your English is near perfect, and I only noticed one or two things that aren't even worth mentioning- just some past and present tense issues on singular words. I really hope you continue the story though. I couldn't really care about tiny Grammer issues, so even with them it's enjoyable!