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8/14/2017 c5 9Merchant Of Blue Death
Good story, I'm sorry I missed it when it came out and hopefully you're still working on it. I like the way you've changed not only Kana-chan's background but her father's as well, it just adds that flavor that was missing in the canon story as well as most fan fics.

My only complaint and it's more of a nitpick than anything but it drives the career Sailor in me up the wall. The proper abbreviation for Kalinin's sea going rank is LCDR or Lt CDR, not Lt Com as you've written. Should you have questions about how a rank is written or military in general send me a PM and I'll help you as much as I can. As for the story I hope it's updated sometime soon.
7/9/2017 c5 7tatzecom
fuck this shits good you wrote a very good story and I can't wait till you update it! it's just nice! can't find other words!
5/9/2017 c4 Achilles1990
Nice story keep it up. :)
4/4/2017 c4 10Just a Crazy-Man
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3/31/2017 c3 Just a Crazy-Man
nice
3/29/2017 c2 Just a Crazy-Man
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3/28/2017 c1 Just a Crazy-Man
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