for RWBY A New Legend of Kamen Rider9/15/2017 c1 
5DLite96
LGCrusader was pretty spot on in his review. I think you might want to rehaul this at some point, I'm not saying its bad because I understand how people feel about their OC stories, because they dearly love them. But I suggest you really take that review to heart.
5DLite96LGCrusader was pretty spot on in his review. I think you might want to rehaul this at some point, I'm not saying its bad because I understand how people feel about their OC stories, because they dearly love them. But I suggest you really take that review to heart.
9/9/2017 c9 Ultimate Kuuga
Sorry everyone. I forgot to change the chapter name. It's name Shock Therapy. My bad.
Sorry everyone. I forgot to change the chapter name. It's name Shock Therapy. My bad.
7/11/2017 c8 1LGCrusader
Hey, Ultimate Kuuga. I just wanted to give my personal thoughts and some criticism on your story as a whole. Story wise, it's not bad except for a few things. Your oc's, in my opinion, doesn't have much substance to them. Kenichi, Dylan, and Ellie have this seemingly perfect characters with no flaws, which makes the characters unrelatable. And also I have an issue with Dylan just giving out rider belts to the RWBY cast for no other apparent reason other than ' for the foreshadowed fight.' Another problem I had with the story was how the romance was handled. Kenichi sudden liking towards Blake seemed out of nowhere, but how you used it as a comedic effect kinda makes up for it. But if you want an oc x character romance, you need to build it up their relationship over time, same applies for the lancaster ship in the story as well. And lastly, I had a hard time enjoying this story because of your writing. Multiple dialogues from other characters are just smashed in one paragraph, which makes it hard to follow who saying what. (In writing, when a character finishes their dialogue and the new character speaks, you must write a completely new paragraph.)
So overall, it's not bad but it could use lots of improvement. I hope this criticism will help you in your writing.
-Sincerely, your friendly neighborhood writer, LGCrusader.
1LGCrusaderHey, Ultimate Kuuga. I just wanted to give my personal thoughts and some criticism on your story as a whole. Story wise, it's not bad except for a few things. Your oc's, in my opinion, doesn't have much substance to them. Kenichi, Dylan, and Ellie have this seemingly perfect characters with no flaws, which makes the characters unrelatable. And also I have an issue with Dylan just giving out rider belts to the RWBY cast for no other apparent reason other than ' for the foreshadowed fight.' Another problem I had with the story was how the romance was handled. Kenichi sudden liking towards Blake seemed out of nowhere, but how you used it as a comedic effect kinda makes up for it. But if you want an oc x character romance, you need to build it up their relationship over time, same applies for the lancaster ship in the story as well. And lastly, I had a hard time enjoying this story because of your writing. Multiple dialogues from other characters are just smashed in one paragraph, which makes it hard to follow who saying what. (In writing, when a character finishes their dialogue and the new character speaks, you must write a completely new paragraph.)
So overall, it's not bad but it could use lots of improvement. I hope this criticism will help you in your writing.
-Sincerely, your friendly neighborhood writer, LGCrusader.
7/6/2017 c8 Ultimate Agito
Agito would be able to defeat Roman better than Kuuga.
Agito would be able to defeat Roman better than Kuuga.
5/11/2017 c6 Ultimate Agito
Agito would be able to beat Kuuga in that form.
Agito would be able to beat Kuuga in that form.
5/11/2017 c6 Kamenreviewer
Meh. I don't mind her being "you know who."
But.
เป็คนไทยเลยหรือ?!
I'm Thai as well!
Meh. I don't mind her being "you know who."
But.
เป็คนไทยเลยหรือ?!
I'm Thai as well!
4/27/2017 c4 Kamenreviewer
This story is AWESOME!
I BET THAT RUBY COULD BE KABUTO!
WEISS CAN BE KIVA!(BECAUSE OF ROYALTY.)
REN CAN BE HIBIKI!(LOOK AT APEARANCE.)
As who the others could be... I don't know. But you. Good author sir. Make an AWESOME STORY.
This story is AWESOME!
I BET THAT RUBY COULD BE KABUTO!
WEISS CAN BE KIVA!(BECAUSE OF ROYALTY.)
REN CAN BE HIBIKI!(LOOK AT APEARANCE.)
As who the others could be... I don't know. But you. Good author sir. Make an AWESOME STORY.
3/30/2017 c1 Guest
fu**ing awesome story
fu**ing awesome story
3/29/2017 c1 Pamook Rujirek
Fu**Ing Awesome and I can't wait to read next chapter now.
Fu**Ing Awesome and I can't wait to read next chapter now.