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1TheInvisibleVoid
Hello. I have recently found great interest in this retelling fanfiction of Dinosaur King, and honestly, I have found its plot to be much greater than that of the actual Dinosaur King. You have made a truly great story, and it is a massive tragedy that the Dinosaur King anime has not been rebooted as per its plot.
The only thing I personally see missing in the story is Seth's Cryolophosaurus. Do you plan on ever featuring it? I of course have no problem if that is not to be the case, I am just curious as it was Seth's only signature Dinosaur in the Anime after the Saurophaganax and the Black T. rex, the latter of which does not exist in Dinosaur King Retold as I have read.
1TheInvisibleVoidHello. I have recently found great interest in this retelling fanfiction of Dinosaur King, and honestly, I have found its plot to be much greater than that of the actual Dinosaur King. You have made a truly great story, and it is a massive tragedy that the Dinosaur King anime has not been rebooted as per its plot.
The only thing I personally see missing in the story is Seth's Cryolophosaurus. Do you plan on ever featuring it? I of course have no problem if that is not to be the case, I am just curious as it was Seth's only signature Dinosaur in the Anime after the Saurophaganax and the Black T. rex, the latter of which does not exist in Dinosaur King Retold as I have read.
4/5 c78 Guest
I LOVE DINOSAUR KING and this Fanfic from the beginning where you added the Alpha-Gangs Dinosaurs to the D-Team was really needed for me, I personally didn’t want to see my main man Spiny get crushed for the 100th time but I love how this story grew into its own version of Dinosaur-King it basically fixed every minor problem or issue it had, the dinosaurs have personalities and can speak, the stories more “darker” as the chapters go on, there’s more character development made for everyone, hell even the weaker dinosaurs got buffed in this fanfic ESPECIALLY Meg whom was my personal favorite dinosaur but all in all another Fantastic Chapter, the absolute pinnacle of Dinosaur King fanfics. I hope the dinosaurs and everyone will be able to rest in peace or better yet maybe even a timeskip!
I LOVE DINOSAUR KING and this Fanfic from the beginning where you added the Alpha-Gangs Dinosaurs to the D-Team was really needed for me, I personally didn’t want to see my main man Spiny get crushed for the 100th time but I love how this story grew into its own version of Dinosaur-King it basically fixed every minor problem or issue it had, the dinosaurs have personalities and can speak, the stories more “darker” as the chapters go on, there’s more character development made for everyone, hell even the weaker dinosaurs got buffed in this fanfic ESPECIALLY Meg whom was my personal favorite dinosaur but all in all another Fantastic Chapter, the absolute pinnacle of Dinosaur King fanfics. I hope the dinosaurs and everyone will be able to rest in peace or better yet maybe even a timeskip!
3/23 c77 9HunterHQ
Last new dinosaur to come is Cryolophosaurus, can assume may go to Seth but will see the personality. Maybe eco terrorist hating humans for global wamring and climate change or dino supremacist?
9HunterHQLast new dinosaur to come is Cryolophosaurus, can assume may go to Seth but will see the personality. Maybe eco terrorist hating humans for global wamring and climate change or dino supremacist?
3/22 c78 554godamora
Glad to see this back. And we got to finally see that field of flowers from the original opening.
554godamoraGlad to see this back. And we got to finally see that field of flowers from the original opening.
3/22 c78 7Harold Godwinson
Dude... I literally have no idea what to write for this one. especially with what I saw in the sneak peak for the next chapter.
That battle was tense AF, Brontikens saving his friends on top of that Ursula finding Zoes pressure point, there's just too much for me to narrow down what I enjoyed best.
Now to pray that Brontikens and company will survive the next chapter
7Harold GodwinsonDude... I literally have no idea what to write for this one. especially with what I saw in the sneak peak for the next chapter.
That battle was tense AF, Brontikens saving his friends on top of that Ursula finding Zoes pressure point, there's just too much for me to narrow down what I enjoyed best.
Now to pray that Brontikens and company will survive the next chapter
3/21 c78 mitchell.gamble.brandy
This is a good chapter man I hope Brontikens and the others will be alright man but other than this I will loom forward to the next chapter including the one where the last dinosaur will come and hope the D team can rescue that one but other than this I wish you luck for now man.
This is a good chapter man I hope Brontikens and the others will be alright man but other than this I will loom forward to the next chapter including the one where the last dinosaur will come and hope the D team can rescue that one but other than this I wish you luck for now man.
3/21 c78 9HunterHQ
Funny the spongebob quotes there about mayonaise and horseradish
Wouldnt that mean they have to eliminate Helga also since she also betrayed them? Why she and the Alpha gang go back to Dr Z in such a toxic environment wonder if they will ever have the guts to break free.
Brontikens showing true loyalty there he is growing and maturing as an individual. Wonder if he is aware he would eventually be discovered if he decided to set up Pyro for failure last time.
Honestly the alpha gang should just keep their dinosaurs in card form if they step out of line.
Shame for the environmental damage there with the fires.
9HunterHQFunny the spongebob quotes there about mayonaise and horseradish
Wouldnt that mean they have to eliminate Helga also since she also betrayed them? Why she and the Alpha gang go back to Dr Z in such a toxic environment wonder if they will ever have the guts to break free.
Brontikens showing true loyalty there he is growing and maturing as an individual. Wonder if he is aware he would eventually be discovered if he decided to set up Pyro for failure last time.
Honestly the alpha gang should just keep their dinosaurs in card form if they step out of line.
Shame for the environmental damage there with the fires.
1/20 c77 Kaden Bowdige
I would like to see torch teaching Terry how to master fire scorcher and reduce the stamina drain.
I would like to see torch teaching Terry how to master fire scorcher and reduce the stamina drain.
1/1 c77 7Harold Godwinson
I'll be the first to admit that I wasn't expecting an update from you till after the start of the new year. Doesn't mean it wasn't worth the wait.
The whole race against time aspect was the winner for me in this battle, and the fact that Salty fought Yeager at the same waterfall where he faught the D-team certainly gave him the win here. As for the alpha trio falling out of the tree that was several stories high, no one should ask how they survived if they could survive going over Niagra falls several times.
Keeping to the alpha gang still, I like how there seems to be a growing change of heart throughout them all. Especially Ursula considering she wanted Pyro and Torch to burn Aki when they invaded Sanjo. As for Maximus and Gigas, I like how they made up in the end.
I'll end this here by saying two things.
How come Ursula didn't respond to the Old lady thing, while Lex responded to the size comments?
And the the bloody hell was the D-team?
7Harold GodwinsonI'll be the first to admit that I wasn't expecting an update from you till after the start of the new year. Doesn't mean it wasn't worth the wait.
The whole race against time aspect was the winner for me in this battle, and the fact that Salty fought Yeager at the same waterfall where he faught the D-team certainly gave him the win here. As for the alpha trio falling out of the tree that was several stories high, no one should ask how they survived if they could survive going over Niagra falls several times.
Keeping to the alpha gang still, I like how there seems to be a growing change of heart throughout them all. Especially Ursula considering she wanted Pyro and Torch to burn Aki when they invaded Sanjo. As for Maximus and Gigas, I like how they made up in the end.
I'll end this here by saying two things.
How come Ursula didn't respond to the Old lady thing, while Lex responded to the size comments?
And the the bloody hell was the D-team?
1/1 c77 9HunterHQ
Never thought they would return to the Amazon again.
Glad to see the alpha gang have some redeemable parts in them still really they along with their dinos ought to leave before it's too late.
Happy part of my story helped inspire that moment from the DS game.
Now Seth planted his mole/double agent like a hidden parasite or cancer cell within the enemies now to see it unfold in the future. Too bad we didn't see the scene how and when it happened
How come in season 1 the cosmos stones weren't active yet? Or Seth didn't try to make a move on them first?
Given the Tarzan reference imagine like that one episode where dinosaurs still roamed in a hidden isolated world. Like Nessie? Would Seth try to hunt for her? Seen series like Terra Nova or Primeval? Some involve time travel and anomalies bringing in creatures from the past or even the future to the present maybe new enemies exploit time warps (like how the Time Machine brought dinosaurs to the present) and summon dinosaurs to attack people not just simply dino hunts?
Dino stalker, dino crisis, Jurassic the hunted can give ideas? In modern day people can want to resort to using guns as well.
When you see series like x men why should the mutants cower under humans or be mistreated, maybe some can think why should dinosaurs be in hiding or slaves to humans.
Would Seth turn Gigas and the others to cards and reprogram them to be loyal?
Regarding the virus surprised the dinosaurs or the pirates didn't get sick themselves.
Seen series like Terra Nova or Primeval? Some involve time travel and anomalies bringing in creatures from the past or even the future to the present maybe new enemies exploit time warps (like how the Time Machine brought dinosaurs to the present) and summon dinosaurs to attack people not just simply dino hunts?
Dino stalker, dino crisis, Jurassic the hunted can give ideas? In modern day people can want to resort to using guns as well.
9HunterHQNever thought they would return to the Amazon again.
Glad to see the alpha gang have some redeemable parts in them still really they along with their dinos ought to leave before it's too late.
Happy part of my story helped inspire that moment from the DS game.
Now Seth planted his mole/double agent like a hidden parasite or cancer cell within the enemies now to see it unfold in the future. Too bad we didn't see the scene how and when it happened
How come in season 1 the cosmos stones weren't active yet? Or Seth didn't try to make a move on them first?
Given the Tarzan reference imagine like that one episode where dinosaurs still roamed in a hidden isolated world. Like Nessie? Would Seth try to hunt for her? Seen series like Terra Nova or Primeval? Some involve time travel and anomalies bringing in creatures from the past or even the future to the present maybe new enemies exploit time warps (like how the Time Machine brought dinosaurs to the present) and summon dinosaurs to attack people not just simply dino hunts?
Dino stalker, dino crisis, Jurassic the hunted can give ideas? In modern day people can want to resort to using guns as well.
When you see series like x men why should the mutants cower under humans or be mistreated, maybe some can think why should dinosaurs be in hiding or slaves to humans.
Would Seth turn Gigas and the others to cards and reprogram them to be loyal?
Regarding the virus surprised the dinosaurs or the pirates didn't get sick themselves.
Seen series like Terra Nova or Primeval? Some involve time travel and anomalies bringing in creatures from the past or even the future to the present maybe new enemies exploit time warps (like how the Time Machine brought dinosaurs to the present) and summon dinosaurs to attack people not just simply dino hunts?
Dino stalker, dino crisis, Jurassic the hunted can give ideas? In modern day people can want to resort to using guns as well.