for Dinosaur King Retold12/31/2024 c77 mitchell.gamble.brandy
This is a very good chapter man and I got a feeling the next chapter is going to be suspence when it comes out and I hope they can rescue the Rajasaurus but other than that I hope things go well with you and I wish you luck for now man.
This is a very good chapter man and I got a feeling the next chapter is going to be suspence when it comes out and I hope they can rescue the Rajasaurus but other than that I hope things go well with you and I wish you luck for now man.
10/31/2024 c1 Vinay-kox01
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Thank you for your time, and I look forward to the possibility of working together on this exciting project.
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Dinosaur King Retold" and was truly captivated by your compelling narrative and unique vision. The depth of your story, combined with its striking potential, sparked my imagination, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a comic format.
As a professional commission artist with a passion for storytelling through visual art, I am currently open for new projects. I would love the opportunity to collaborate with you in adapting your story into a comic, where I can bring your characters and world to life with meticulous care and creativity. My goal would be to stay true to the essence of your work while enhancing the emotional impact and immersive experience for readers.
If this is something that piques your interest, I would be thrilled to discuss potential collaboration details, including artistic style, project scope, and pricing, to ensure we can create something truly special together. It would be great if we could discuss this further on Discord my username is [graphic_gold] or X : VKox139175 to exchange ideas more seamlessly.
Thank you for your time, and I look forward to the possibility of working together on this exciting project.
10/14/2024 c76 Guest
Hey, are we all going to ignore the fact that things are good now between D-Team and Zahrah?... Well, mostly Tank and Zahrah, but, you know what I mean.
Hey, are we all going to ignore the fact that things are good now between D-Team and Zahrah?... Well, mostly Tank and Zahrah, but, you know what I mean.
10/11/2024 c76 
63Earth Beast
Genie has been rescue And looks like a three way battle is about to hapen.
And if Seth is working on what I think it is, it could be bad.
Anyway, good luck with your next chapter!
Earth Beast
63Earth BeastGenie has been rescue And looks like a three way battle is about to hapen.
And if Seth is working on what I think it is, it could be bad.
Anyway, good luck with your next chapter!
Earth Beast
10/7/2024 c76 554godamora
Glad to see you back. I also saw the reference with the title. And thank you for including the in memory of section.
554godamoraGlad to see you back. I also saw the reference with the title. And thank you for including the in memory of section.
10/6/2024 c76 50God of the Challenge
I recommend the restaurant business. You get decent pay, and depending on the place, a free meal afterwards.
50God of the ChallengeI recommend the restaurant business. You get decent pay, and depending on the place, a free meal afterwards.
10/6/2024 c76 8EquestriamonWriter101
So the D-Team have finally saved Genie and he's now free from Seth once and for all!
But buy you've got some plot to explain soon, friction between Gigas, Armatus and Maximus, Brontikens suddenly having a change of heart and Seth using the chips. What is his plan?
But on the other hand I'm glad to see that Max and Rex have finally patched thing up between them.
Looking forward for the next chapter.
8EquestriamonWriter101So the D-Team have finally saved Genie and he's now free from Seth once and for all!
But buy you've got some plot to explain soon, friction between Gigas, Armatus and Maximus, Brontikens suddenly having a change of heart and Seth using the chips. What is his plan?
But on the other hand I'm glad to see that Max and Rex have finally patched thing up between them.
Looking forward for the next chapter.
10/6/2024 c75 9HunterHQ
Has Dr z tried to steal Seth research for himself so he can become dinosaur king? Surprised he isn’t Worried Seth will outdo him or may even usurp him? Seth did mention Dr Z as the type to steal others’ work after all so he should keep a leash on him?
Wonder if some dinos that don’t want to be involved on either side become spectators or Neutral? Wanting to live their own lives free and wild instead. Rebels to the system.
Right now I see Seth as a builder of a plan with many tools at his disposal. Still it’s his Responsibility to maintain his tools properly to reach that plan. Him being the builder to Shi whom I could see as the architect.
Have to wonder how the rex skeleton has dna and cells after dead for so long, is this like a special dinosaur when alive? Or a random one Seth found. Imagine if Seth will revive an army from the dead. Will this rex have any connection to Terry i wonder, inagine future black dinosaurs.
9HunterHQHas Dr z tried to steal Seth research for himself so he can become dinosaur king? Surprised he isn’t Worried Seth will outdo him or may even usurp him? Seth did mention Dr Z as the type to steal others’ work after all so he should keep a leash on him?
Wonder if some dinos that don’t want to be involved on either side become spectators or Neutral? Wanting to live their own lives free and wild instead. Rebels to the system.
Right now I see Seth as a builder of a plan with many tools at his disposal. Still it’s his Responsibility to maintain his tools properly to reach that plan. Him being the builder to Shi whom I could see as the architect.
Have to wonder how the rex skeleton has dna and cells after dead for so long, is this like a special dinosaur when alive? Or a random one Seth found. Imagine if Seth will revive an army from the dead. Will this rex have any connection to Terry i wonder, inagine future black dinosaurs.
10/6/2024 c76 HunterHQ
Regaridng Pyro’s words about a dino tranquiliser, well Dr Drake was able to tranquilise a dinosaur with his big needle so surely he could make one for them too. Surprised he didnt suspect him.
Didnt think he and Yaeger would be a couple. Guess psychos flock together.
Bailey scared of Zayid? Surely she could just fire shock wave and sufficate him with ease.
Glad to see the main alpha dinosaurs are still safe for now they have each other and that bond is what they have over the fake clone dinosaurs. They should do fusion moves together. Brontikens was in the cloak and on a scooter? No way…better if Helga was the shooter but glad she is doing good with Brontikens.
Good luck finding the ninjas or puttinng a bounty on them Seth, they can make hunters the hunted.
Regaridng Pyro’s words about a dino tranquiliser, well Dr Drake was able to tranquilise a dinosaur with his big needle so surely he could make one for them too. Surprised he didnt suspect him.
Didnt think he and Yaeger would be a couple. Guess psychos flock together.
Bailey scared of Zayid? Surely she could just fire shock wave and sufficate him with ease.
Glad to see the main alpha dinosaurs are still safe for now they have each other and that bond is what they have over the fake clone dinosaurs. They should do fusion moves together. Brontikens was in the cloak and on a scooter? No way…better if Helga was the shooter but glad she is doing good with Brontikens.
Good luck finding the ninjas or puttinng a bounty on them Seth, they can make hunters the hunted.
10/6/2024 c76 HunterHQ
It’s clear we see the ninjas have Morals and principles, even they have limits to loyalty and it’s best they leave as they did rather than get disposed off by Seth. Still there is a possibility they or Zayid can be questioned, interrogated for info on Seth;s whereabouts, truth serum can help if the space pirates can whip up one.
Wonder how Seth plans to deal with Loose ends, snitch or runaways he’s still human no way can he know all of them. Anyone who want to confess or turn themselves in. (I feel even the Alpha trio have standards too given they were unwilling to go along with the India attack). Maybe it’s not too late for them to turn back, though for Dr Z given how he got physical on Ursula chances for him to realise his wrong path are slipping. How come he hasn’t passed away yet from stress and old age is a mystery to me.
Honestly thought the alpha gang would think for themselves for once like Zander and Ursula once did letting saurolophus and iguanodon to the D Team and ursula protesting she refuses to go back to Dr Z in Ruff and Ready. She did it once she could do it again, Surely their dinosaurs would do the same, they’re better off away from Seth. Rod and Laura left so surely they can too It’s clear Seth Can’t be trusted even the Trio aren’t that stupid seeing how they are slowly becoming obsolete. Same for their dinosaurs. Sometimes better to be known as one’s enemies.
Wonder how do they and Seth’s minions get back to the backland and off it without notice every time, surely someone can place tracker on them or satellite footage follow their vehicle back to base.
Helga also wonder why she still is among criminals. She should leave and the place become messy and disorganised again not to mention the food also is horrible without her. Not like the criminals can cook for themselves. Hope she gets her memories back before it’s too late.
Wonder if Seikatsu is keeping more secrets, thought allies don’t hide from each other.
Imagine because of this Maybe a new dinosaur would take initiative to break away from either side to destroy cosmos stone on own or make own faction. Lose faith in god why leave things to fate when you can forge your own future. Or worse why worship a god when you can try to become one.
Hasn’t Seth ever had worries of the ninjas Assassinating him in his sleep? Still human and needs food and rest, he should have moments of weakness and he can make a mistake out of arrogance, All villains make the mistake of believing they can’t lose after all.
His plan using the chip, still it can be removed or destroyed similarly to an alpha ball. Surely Dr Z can always build a new alpha controller given the one he sent in Gameshow Showdown exploded then next episode he had another one ready for Styracosaurs. If anything it would be better if Shi were to Corrupt dino souls.
Would Seikatsu be able to purify them or even Seth of evil?
A mistake the D Team made before was not taking the enemystones when they had the chance in season 1, or their dinosaurs when they had the chance everytime they beat them. Now lives got lost sadly….
Rod and Laura wonder if they may come back they know the systems of the base more than anyone. Or the group could Get a droid to hack, reprogram or see data. Go determine other locations where it has been from memory banks.
Even if Seth treats everyone like tools or pawns, whether he uses them correctly is another matter, if he continues to reckless mistreat or Sacrifice them eventually he will have no one left to follow orders. After all everyone fails and makes mistakes so those that don’t tolerate failure with execution or exile will make that common mistake always seeing loyalty as expendable which can plant seeds of rebellion or revolt.
Surprise Why no one tried to challenge him, or that there hasn’t been any infighting or attempts to sabotage each other or use each other as scapegoats to take the blame for failure.
Glad things sorted out a bit more with Zahrah and Rex.
Spiny sure was nonsensical as usual but worry about his stupidity being his undoing one of these days. A miracle for the D Team though worry Seth will use the chip to brainwash their dinosaurs, it’s like the one in Carnival of Chaos right? The anime seeing the chips there. Is he having enough alpha metal or money to fund these operations?
Nice you able to post this, also condolences to Rachel Lilis the VA of Ursula and Laura. Let’s all treasure life preciously.
It’s clear we see the ninjas have Morals and principles, even they have limits to loyalty and it’s best they leave as they did rather than get disposed off by Seth. Still there is a possibility they or Zayid can be questioned, interrogated for info on Seth;s whereabouts, truth serum can help if the space pirates can whip up one.
Wonder how Seth plans to deal with Loose ends, snitch or runaways he’s still human no way can he know all of them. Anyone who want to confess or turn themselves in. (I feel even the Alpha trio have standards too given they were unwilling to go along with the India attack). Maybe it’s not too late for them to turn back, though for Dr Z given how he got physical on Ursula chances for him to realise his wrong path are slipping. How come he hasn’t passed away yet from stress and old age is a mystery to me.
Honestly thought the alpha gang would think for themselves for once like Zander and Ursula once did letting saurolophus and iguanodon to the D Team and ursula protesting she refuses to go back to Dr Z in Ruff and Ready. She did it once she could do it again, Surely their dinosaurs would do the same, they’re better off away from Seth. Rod and Laura left so surely they can too It’s clear Seth Can’t be trusted even the Trio aren’t that stupid seeing how they are slowly becoming obsolete. Same for their dinosaurs. Sometimes better to be known as one’s enemies.
Wonder how do they and Seth’s minions get back to the backland and off it without notice every time, surely someone can place tracker on them or satellite footage follow their vehicle back to base.
Helga also wonder why she still is among criminals. She should leave and the place become messy and disorganised again not to mention the food also is horrible without her. Not like the criminals can cook for themselves. Hope she gets her memories back before it’s too late.
Wonder if Seikatsu is keeping more secrets, thought allies don’t hide from each other.
Imagine because of this Maybe a new dinosaur would take initiative to break away from either side to destroy cosmos stone on own or make own faction. Lose faith in god why leave things to fate when you can forge your own future. Or worse why worship a god when you can try to become one.
Hasn’t Seth ever had worries of the ninjas Assassinating him in his sleep? Still human and needs food and rest, he should have moments of weakness and he can make a mistake out of arrogance, All villains make the mistake of believing they can’t lose after all.
His plan using the chip, still it can be removed or destroyed similarly to an alpha ball. Surely Dr Z can always build a new alpha controller given the one he sent in Gameshow Showdown exploded then next episode he had another one ready for Styracosaurs. If anything it would be better if Shi were to Corrupt dino souls.
Would Seikatsu be able to purify them or even Seth of evil?
A mistake the D Team made before was not taking the enemystones when they had the chance in season 1, or their dinosaurs when they had the chance everytime they beat them. Now lives got lost sadly….
Rod and Laura wonder if they may come back they know the systems of the base more than anyone. Or the group could Get a droid to hack, reprogram or see data. Go determine other locations where it has been from memory banks.
Even if Seth treats everyone like tools or pawns, whether he uses them correctly is another matter, if he continues to reckless mistreat or Sacrifice them eventually he will have no one left to follow orders. After all everyone fails and makes mistakes so those that don’t tolerate failure with execution or exile will make that common mistake always seeing loyalty as expendable which can plant seeds of rebellion or revolt.
Surprise Why no one tried to challenge him, or that there hasn’t been any infighting or attempts to sabotage each other or use each other as scapegoats to take the blame for failure.
Glad things sorted out a bit more with Zahrah and Rex.
Spiny sure was nonsensical as usual but worry about his stupidity being his undoing one of these days. A miracle for the D Team though worry Seth will use the chip to brainwash their dinosaurs, it’s like the one in Carnival of Chaos right? The anime seeing the chips there. Is he having enough alpha metal or money to fund these operations?
Nice you able to post this, also condolences to Rachel Lilis the VA of Ursula and Laura. Let’s all treasure life preciously.
10/6/2024 c76 7Harold Godwinson
Now, was this chapter worth the wait?
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OH HEEEEEELLLL YEAH!
What to talk about first? Oh I know!
Zarahs redemption. I honestly liked how she had been moping and feeling guilty ever since her rescue, shows she's not a heartless b-word. I honestly believe with time, and showing that she still sorry for her previous actions, she and Rex will get together (Without spoiling much, I got a separate relationship in mind in my spin off). I enjoyed watching her put herself in harms way to rescue Genie. Nice redemption journey all around
Next the battle. Mah shiiiiiiiiiit, it was tense, it was good once the d-team showed up but too much innocent death if you ask me. I get Pyro is in for the murder, but maybe tone it down just a bit on the gore. Was just a bit too graphic for me (and before you say anything I'm well aware of all the nasty stuff we've seen in this story, but, innocent men women and children is just... y'know).
On the plus side of the battle, Ofu losing her cool was funny to watch, talk about a blow to ego. Then Pyro getting fed up with Spinys stupidness made my girlfriend and I really giggle and laugh. And Zayid and his theives getting cuffed in the end was icing on the cake.
Finally we have Max and Rex finally making up. Honestly it was about damn time they talked it out, and it's nice that they finally understand each other's perspective. I liked how Rex felt terrible for accusing Max being a traitor, that really needed to be addressed.
As for Brontikens. What exactly he is up to is anyone's guess. But it don't take a DK expert to know what Seth is doing with that T-rex skeleton.
Now if you'll excuse me, I got some writing to do
7Harold GodwinsonNow, was this chapter worth the wait?
...
...
...
OH HEEEEEELLLL YEAH!
What to talk about first? Oh I know!
Zarahs redemption. I honestly liked how she had been moping and feeling guilty ever since her rescue, shows she's not a heartless b-word. I honestly believe with time, and showing that she still sorry for her previous actions, she and Rex will get together (Without spoiling much, I got a separate relationship in mind in my spin off). I enjoyed watching her put herself in harms way to rescue Genie. Nice redemption journey all around
Next the battle. Mah shiiiiiiiiiit, it was tense, it was good once the d-team showed up but too much innocent death if you ask me. I get Pyro is in for the murder, but maybe tone it down just a bit on the gore. Was just a bit too graphic for me (and before you say anything I'm well aware of all the nasty stuff we've seen in this story, but, innocent men women and children is just... y'know).
On the plus side of the battle, Ofu losing her cool was funny to watch, talk about a blow to ego. Then Pyro getting fed up with Spinys stupidness made my girlfriend and I really giggle and laugh. And Zayid and his theives getting cuffed in the end was icing on the cake.
Finally we have Max and Rex finally making up. Honestly it was about damn time they talked it out, and it's nice that they finally understand each other's perspective. I liked how Rex felt terrible for accusing Max being a traitor, that really needed to be addressed.
As for Brontikens. What exactly he is up to is anyone's guess. But it don't take a DK expert to know what Seth is doing with that T-rex skeleton.
Now if you'll excuse me, I got some writing to do
10/5/2024 c76 mitchell.gamble.brandy
This is a great chapter you did there mate I hope they can get the green cosmo stone in the next chapter and that Salty can win in his upcoming battle with Yeager and great that the D team had save Genie and also quit surprized at what Brontikins and Hela had done to Pyro and Yeager I can only guess is that maybe one day soon Brontikins is somehow starting to turn over a new leaf and Helga maybe on to something about Seth and I wish you luck in finding a nice job for yourself mate however I hope you can still do this story whenever you make long time breaks from whatever job you can get your hands on but other than all this got luck for now mate.
This is a great chapter you did there mate I hope they can get the green cosmo stone in the next chapter and that Salty can win in his upcoming battle with Yeager and great that the D team had save Genie and also quit surprized at what Brontikins and Hela had done to Pyro and Yeager I can only guess is that maybe one day soon Brontikins is somehow starting to turn over a new leaf and Helga maybe on to something about Seth and I wish you luck in finding a nice job for yourself mate however I hope you can still do this story whenever you make long time breaks from whatever job you can get your hands on but other than all this got luck for now mate.
9/1/2024 c73 2Animal Behaviorist
Can't believe Ace and Beta, as a couple, took such a beating in this battle, even though they were victorious in the end.
2Animal BehavioristCan't believe Ace and Beta, as a couple, took such a beating in this battle, even though they were victorious in the end.