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3/16/2019 c1 9EleanorGardner
Very nice! Where he talks about Elanor, you could possibly change the word sequence to "my sweet little elf-like Elanor". That would give the line a slightly better flow. But overall, very good poem! I have not seen anyone else who has written poems for LOTR. Very original way of writing fanfiction.
4/18/2017 c1 1Musical-Mel
I'm not much for poetry, but I think you captured how Sam felt well. There were some spelling and grammatical errors, as well as some inconsistency with verb tenses, but I enjoyed reading it! Well done!
3/31/2017 c1 13Their Inner Thoughts
This poem has lots of potential. With a little bit of editing and rhythmic pattern, this could easily fit into an epilogue-type musing from Sam. Great thoughts and reading into Sam's character; he always was my favourite Hobbit.

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