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7/13 c41 3thatsmycigar
This is so sad :( But still amazing. Keep writing!
It seems like there aren't that many people reading Newsies anymore, and I was wondering if you would mind giving me feedback on mine? I'm trying to get better as a writer but it's hard when nobody is there to tell you what you're doing wrong. You totally don't have to though ~thatsmycigar
7/13 c34 thatsmycigar
'"Cowboy is the borough leader"
"Cowboy?" she laughed.
Spot shrugged. "Got a hat, bandanna, thing for the West. Just go with it, Doll. His name's Jack Kelly."
She laughed at the almost annoyed expression on his face as he described the other newsie.'
I loved this honestly it's hilarious and so Spot
7/13 c1 thatsmycigar
WOW this is amazing! "The crowd was dumbfounded. Spot was intrigued" Perfect.
6/17 c41 4Blossom9
I’m loving this story! Excited to see where it goes!
6/4 c41 Viola
ACK OH MY GOSH UR ALIVE!HELLOOOOO
loving it! Honestly so cute and aMaZiNg as usual, plz keep updating, def need it in quarantine
5/1 c41 6Jean-Moddalle
this will be my evening-ender.
well done, as is common.

Salut JM
4/27 c1 4The Lonely Hunter
Spot and I are intrigued! Who is this mysterious character? I am looking forward to reading on.

Thanks for sharing!
4/27 c41 10Love.Fiction.2020
Likin this story so far.
4/27 c40 Love.Fiction.2020
liking it,
4/21 c40 Snowmuchtolove
I liked your choices in this chapter. It's right in line with Spot's character to pull her toward him. Making her come to him, on his terms. And she understands that.
4/21 c40 Lemoncello 158
Happy to see an update, Thanks and hurry back with more.
4/19 c40 Guestanewone
You’re back!
1. I hope you’re healthy and safe
2. You could’ve written absolute trash and I would’ve been happy but no you came back and wrote an absolute gem! Looking forward (as always) to the next chapter
4/17 c40 10Jaywing25
THEY KISSED OH MY GAWD THEY KISSED WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I CANT BELIEVE THEY KISSED! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR SO LONG
4/13 c40 Bea.t11
I am so happy that you updated! I loved the chapter so much! I just finished rereading the story so far and forgot how much I loved Rois and Spot! Can't wait to see what happens next and to see Rois in action!
4/13 c40 6Jean-Moddalle
you took your sweet time,
but it was worth it.
great work.

Salut JM
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