12/31/2019 c1 Guest
A beautiful fic. You captured vaders dark side and parental side towards luke perfectly. Hes adorably awkward and protective to luke and i love how you wrote lukes character here and the progression of their conflicted father son relationship. Im loving your other fic hostage too and cant wait for it to be updated:)
A beautiful fic. You captured vaders dark side and parental side towards luke perfectly. Hes adorably awkward and protective to luke and i love how you wrote lukes character here and the progression of their conflicted father son relationship. Im loving your other fic hostage too and cant wait for it to be updated:)
11/17/2019 c5 andjelija.nenic
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
11/3/2019 c7 ChrystalRose
Eek! It’s been what feels like a bajillion years since you updated it and I’m so happy it’s finished.
Lots of love,
ChrystalRose
Eek! It’s been what feels like a bajillion years since you updated it and I’m so happy it’s finished.
Lots of love,
ChrystalRose
10/30/2019 c3 andjelija.nenic
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
9/2/2019 c2 46Supermoi
That last part was too fricking cute. And yes, 'Cute' and Darth Vader' dont really go hand in hand I'm quite aware lol
That last part was too fricking cute. And yes, 'Cute' and Darth Vader' dont really go hand in hand I'm quite aware lol
8/12/2019 c7 Alice Carneiro
Oh my God, It was so beautiful! Thank you! I also laughed quite a lot. When Luke jumped into that river I really thought Vader would just pull him out like he did with the fish and burst out laughing with the image in my head. I just wish it was much longer, I honestly thought you would stretch the father revelation untill maybe months with Luke living with Vader as his prisoner on the Empire ships. But I loved it anyway! Keep on writing great stuff.
Oh my God, It was so beautiful! Thank you! I also laughed quite a lot. When Luke jumped into that river I really thought Vader would just pull him out like he did with the fish and burst out laughing with the image in my head. I just wish it was much longer, I honestly thought you would stretch the father revelation untill maybe months with Luke living with Vader as his prisoner on the Empire ships. But I loved it anyway! Keep on writing great stuff.
6/28/2019 c3 4SnowflakesandMozart
This is great! Alternating the POV is working really well and you have loads of witty lines that both fit the narrative and highlight the ironic and often humorous aspects of their situation. My favorite so far is that Luke seemed to idolize his father and want to follow in his footsteps, unaware that he was already doing so (sorry, since I can't copy the quote, it's not exact, but that's the gist). I wish I had time to finish the story right now.
This is great! Alternating the POV is working really well and you have loads of witty lines that both fit the narrative and highlight the ironic and often humorous aspects of their situation. My favorite so far is that Luke seemed to idolize his father and want to follow in his footsteps, unaware that he was already doing so (sorry, since I can't copy the quote, it's not exact, but that's the gist). I wish I had time to finish the story right now.
5/12/2019 c7 Hairupsquareup
This has continued to be one of my favorite feel-good stories. I also like many of your other ones. You are an amazing writer. Please don’t stop writing such good and well-thought out fanfics.
Put Your Hair Up And Square Up—Sonya Deville
This has continued to be one of my favorite feel-good stories. I also like many of your other ones. You are an amazing writer. Please don’t stop writing such good and well-thought out fanfics.
Put Your Hair Up And Square Up—Sonya Deville
4/28/2019 c7 avieryfriend
Totally enjoyed your story! Enjoyable to read...you did a great job with the characterization of Luke and Vader.
I read through the story twice because it was so goodsometimes it's hard to find good Vader and Luke stories...
Totally enjoyed your story! Enjoyable to read...you did a great job with the characterization of Luke and Vader.
I read through the story twice because it was so goodsometimes it's hard to find good Vader and Luke stories...