for Harry Potter and The Rebellion Of Hogwarts12/31/2024 c30 Prakith
As much as I like this story, did you really need Amelia to be dumb? I mean she was the head of the DLME and that seemed like a really dumb way to die.
As much as I like this story, did you really need Amelia to be dumb? I mean she was the head of the DLME and that seemed like a really dumb way to die.
12/7/2024 c36 Guest
And that's where you stopped?
And that's where you stopped?
2311/27/2024 c12 FenreldStormblade
order 66...nice... got a laugh out of me for the star wars reference
order 66...nice... got a laugh out of me for the star wars reference
11/20/2024 c34 pincho
These two paragraphs completely contradict eachother:
Harry frowned. "I'll find a way old man, if that is all you need me for then I will take my leave. This is the last time you will see Headmaster, I don't intend to return." Harry turned on his heels and used the Elder wand to bring down Alastor wards surprising the old hit wizard, he then opened the doors and closed them behind himself.
Harry nodded in understanding and slipped the wand into his holster. He turned his back on the old man and went to leave however he suddenly stopped. "I forgive you old man, you did what you felt you needed to, I don't hold my parent's death against you." Harry then walked out of the ward after Alastor had dropped the ward.
These two paragraphs completely contradict eachother:
Harry frowned. "I'll find a way old man, if that is all you need me for then I will take my leave. This is the last time you will see Headmaster, I don't intend to return." Harry turned on his heels and used the Elder wand to bring down Alastor wards surprising the old hit wizard, he then opened the doors and closed them behind himself.
Harry nodded in understanding and slipped the wand into his holster. He turned his back on the old man and went to leave however he suddenly stopped. "I forgive you old man, you did what you felt you needed to, I don't hold my parent's death against you." Harry then walked out of the ward after Alastor had dropped the ward.
11/20/2024 c30 pincho
Bones doing what you had her do made absolutely no sense. The top cop just leaves with rando number 7, despite the higher security, her training, hiring of the most paranoid? The flipping 16 year old was smarter than her.
Bones doing what you had her do made absolutely no sense. The top cop just leaves with rando number 7, despite the higher security, her training, hiring of the most paranoid? The flipping 16 year old was smarter than her.
11/20/2024 c27 pincho
I'll be so disappointed if Draco doesn't die
I'll be so disappointed if Draco doesn't die
11/19/2024 c25 pincho
Damn basically called Hermione a slot and Harry didn't even notice
Damn basically called Hermione a slot and Harry didn't even notice
11/19/2024 c20 pincho
Truly enjoy the story.
This chapter though Harry was totally out of character. There is absolutely no reason for him to not have expelled the death munchers because Dumbledore provided no reason. I say it's ooc because Harry in character would have forced him to reveal the info, not rolled over and blindly accepted. Plus since when has Dumbledore not endangered the students?
Truly enjoy the story.
This chapter though Harry was totally out of character. There is absolutely no reason for him to not have expelled the death munchers because Dumbledore provided no reason. I say it's ooc because Harry in character would have forced him to reveal the info, not rolled over and blindly accepted. Plus since when has Dumbledore not endangered the students?
11/13/2024 c10 ElendorAnardil
Harry is going to be funding Death Eaters now? What for, with Daphne in line to be Lady Slytherin, and a political alliance coming up, are they thinking it's all going to fly under the radar if they just keep paying?
This is ridiculously absurd.
Harry is going to be funding Death Eaters now? What for, with Daphne in line to be Lady Slytherin, and a political alliance coming up, are they thinking it's all going to fly under the radar if they just keep paying?
This is ridiculously absurd.
11/6/2024 c36 jimmy.oz
great chapter keep up the good work. well only way i would agree is if the snake was there as well or at least they had a way to get to it. even then it might be a close thing even with the elder wand.
great chapter keep up the good work. well only way i would agree is if the snake was there as well or at least they had a way to get to it. even then it might be a close thing even with the elder wand.
11/5/2024 c20 jimmy.oz
pretty good story so far keep up the good work. though i think he is going to regret not having them arrested when he first came in like it was his original plan.
pretty good story so far keep up the good work. though i think he is going to regret not having them arrested when he first came in like it was his original plan.
11/5/2024 c19 jimmy.oz
Damn was hoping draco was going to be put away already. crazy to let him in the school like that.
Damn was hoping draco was going to be put away already. crazy to let him in the school like that.
11/5/2024 c15 jimmy.oz
Sucks luna is about to lose her father and have to live with the weasleys and all. still great story so far keep up the good work.
Sucks luna is about to lose her father and have to live with the weasleys and all. still great story so far keep up the good work.