
4/3/2017 c3 zarkan
Not bad really not bad and I cant wait to see what is going to happen next so please update soon see ya.
Not bad really not bad and I cant wait to see what is going to happen next so please update soon see ya.
4/3/2017 c3
6JAIMOL
It's a great story. It has been an incredible first few chapters, I'm wondering how you plan to continue.

It's a great story. It has been an incredible first few chapters, I'm wondering how you plan to continue.
4/2/2017 c3 gaschalk
In ch3 there are a few words missing near the end or the grammar needs to be changed. I like what you have done here and it is good. Nice twist with the house elves being free and married with children.
Stan
In ch3 there are a few words missing near the end or the grammar needs to be changed. I like what you have done here and it is good. Nice twist with the house elves being free and married with children.
Stan
4/2/2017 c3
2Astral8
Wow, legit just read this earlier today in your plot ideas, and was like hmm that one is pretty cool, and then I reached this and was like oh snap he actually writing this story. Anyways, great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter and see how you implement Daphne in.

Wow, legit just read this earlier today in your plot ideas, and was like hmm that one is pretty cool, and then I reached this and was like oh snap he actually writing this story. Anyways, great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter and see how you implement Daphne in.
4/2/2017 c3
3Hudy Leak613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
4/2/2017 c3
2Mike Kromer
Lol had to put that little reference in didn't you. Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Lol had to put that little reference in didn't you. Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.
4/2/2017 c3 Calebros
"Before I died I had a part of my soul placed into this portrait" - So Sirius decided to also create a Soul Anchor and placed it in Gringotts... wise choice
And Sirius also decided it would be a good idea to wait two years to tell Harry he could "meet" his parents? So, was he so wasted that he couldn't remember or was he a selfish prick?
I have to ask: Do you read what you have written before posting (and I don't mean the grammar part)?
"Before I died I had a part of my soul placed into this portrait" - So Sirius decided to also create a Soul Anchor and placed it in Gringotts... wise choice
And Sirius also decided it would be a good idea to wait two years to tell Harry he could "meet" his parents? So, was he so wasted that he couldn't remember or was he a selfish prick?
I have to ask: Do you read what you have written before posting (and I don't mean the grammar part)?
4/1/2017 c1 Calebros
Parceltongue - The secret languange of the post office... would explain a few things :D
Parceltongue - The secret languange of the post office... would explain a few things :D
4/1/2017 c3
44dennisud
If the garden elves are named Daisy and peach I won't be surprised. So far a bit wordy but fine and the pacing is good. A bit more action and I can't wait to see how you're going to add Luna and Daphne!
dennisud

If the garden elves are named Daisy and peach I won't be surprised. So far a bit wordy but fine and the pacing is good. A bit more action and I can't wait to see how you're going to add Luna and Daphne!
dennisud
4/1/2017 c3 George Cristian810
One mistake that I found Mi is wrong,normal is My,my lord not mi lord.
One mistake that I found Mi is wrong,normal is My,my lord not mi lord.