4/1/2017 c3 22Slytherin Studios
nicely done, I can't wait for the next chapter.

4/1/2017 c3 Nick Archer
Good chapter.
My only problem is the way you potray the feeling between the characters. The way you do it is unrealistic (no offence), try to read some harrmony one shots, some of them are very good at potraying the feeling, and try take soke examples from there.

But overall Great chapter.

4/1/2017 c3 1daithi4377
Lol why didn't Hermione understand why Harry was laughing she should gave got the reference as well? Hopefully Andi and Ted take the protection offer from Harry and Ted will survive the war. It's a good thing Potter Manor is huge he's going to need the room to house everyone he wants to protect! Dumbledore is so screwed and the best part he doesn't even realize it yet lol.

4/1/2017 c1 daithi4377
Did the Obliviate take...I'm thinking maybe not...with all the mind magic he used to fool both Severus and Dumbledore I'm hoping he thought to protect his mind from that as well.

4/1/2017 c2 te.nellis
That was cool. Keep it up!

4/1/2017 c3 starboy454
excellent start

4/1/2017 c1 Firemnwnb
Spelling and Grammar errors n this chapter

4/1/2017 c2 1Nick Archer
Very interesting,