for Harry Potter and The Rebellion Of Hogwarts4/1/2017 c3 
7Xyori Nadeshiko
Yey esta muy interesante! Espero mas pronto quiero saber si hay contratos matrimoniales o como se daran las otras relaciones
7Xyori NadeshikoYey esta muy interesante! Espero mas pronto quiero saber si hay contratos matrimoniales o como se daran las otras relaciones
4/1/2017 c1 Guest
Interesting enough.
But Dumbledore erase harry's memory, is kinda annoying.
Overall a good chapter
Interesting enough.
But Dumbledore erase harry's memory, is kinda annoying.
Overall a good chapter
4/1/2017 c1 2Thundramon
Some people may bitch and whine that this is just a Harem story, but sometimes when you are down in your cups and you need a pick me up, a Harem story works equally well, Cheers
2ThundramonSome people may bitch and whine that this is just a Harem story, but sometimes when you are down in your cups and you need a pick me up, a Harem story works equally well, Cheers
4/1/2017 c1 Deathday Party Planner
An interesting premise, is the obliviation permanent or can it be reversed? If it's permanent, I fear this story won't be nearly as interesting. A permanent obliviation opens a gapping plot hole: Why wouldn't Dumbledore just cast a set of compulsion curses and use potions to get rid of all the unnecessary drama/risk and put a trussed Harry Potter on the tracks in front of the Voldemort express - unless you are portraying Dumbles as a man who likes to play with his victims before putting them down. He is an evil man! You can't say Dumbledore likes/loves Harry as he is just grooming him as a child sacrifice. If it is evil to groom a child to die in the Middle East as a suicide bomber, Dumbledore is no different.
An interesting premise, is the obliviation permanent or can it be reversed? If it's permanent, I fear this story won't be nearly as interesting. A permanent obliviation opens a gapping plot hole: Why wouldn't Dumbledore just cast a set of compulsion curses and use potions to get rid of all the unnecessary drama/risk and put a trussed Harry Potter on the tracks in front of the Voldemort express - unless you are portraying Dumbles as a man who likes to play with his victims before putting them down. He is an evil man! You can't say Dumbledore likes/loves Harry as he is just grooming him as a child sacrifice. If it is evil to groom a child to die in the Middle East as a suicide bomber, Dumbledore is no different.
4/1/2017 c3 Hydradrago
Please tell me that was a Luigi and Mario Bros reference lol also love the story the first chapter got me hooked
Please tell me that was a Luigi and Mario Bros reference lol also love the story the first chapter got me hooked