8/13/2021 c35 Guest
you make it sound like a old guy who sits on his ass all day and has everyone else do his work for him is any tip of threat to harry so the who dumbles stopping him thing is crap.
you make it sound like a old guy who sits on his ass all day and has everyone else do his work for him is any tip of threat to harry so the who dumbles stopping him thing is crap.
8/13/2021 c1 24kevin1984
to the reviewer who can't be bothered to register on site please take a chill pill it's fanfaction which means characters can be what author wants them to be. That is what make fanfiction great it doesn't have to be Canon you can create and imagine your favourite characters in what ever scenario you come up with. Also Dumbledore is not dying of old age he dying from the curse on the ring he retrieves from the grunts home
to the reviewer who can't be bothered to register on site please take a chill pill it's fanfaction which means characters can be what author wants them to be. That is what make fanfiction great it doesn't have to be Canon you can create and imagine your favourite characters in what ever scenario you come up with. Also Dumbledore is not dying of old age he dying from the curse on the ring he retrieves from the grunts home
7/23/2021 c35 Guest
OMG I just love this story. I found after reading a story from another author and checked out there list of stories and found this one. Sure glad that I did. Can't wait to see what happens next
OMG I just love this story. I found after reading a story from another author and checked out there list of stories and found this one. Sure glad that I did. Can't wait to see what happens next
7/21/2021 c3 Wolfman-053
I LOVE the Super Mario Bro’s. shoutout! Dare I assume their particular girlfriends are Peach and Daisy?
I LOVE the Super Mario Bro’s. shoutout! Dare I assume their particular girlfriends are Peach and Daisy?
7/11/2021 c35 mumphie
Wow, this is a fantastic story with a lot of depth. Glad to note the recent posting of this chapter. Of course this means it will be a while for the next one! ;) I will look forward to the next one and hope you find time and the muse/mojo to continue.
Wow, this is a fantastic story with a lot of depth. Glad to note the recent posting of this chapter. Of course this means it will be a while for the next one! ;) I will look forward to the next one and hope you find time and the muse/mojo to continue.
7/4/2021 c35 lovelylexi.3483
I seriously think it's time for you to update this story instead of leaving it unfinished.
I seriously think it's time for you to update this story instead of leaving it unfinished.
7/1/2021 c35 19Dragon and Sword Master
I have to admit that after seeing an update of this, I had to reread the whole story, and I'm glad that I did. This was a great read and I cannot wait to read more. I don't blame you for prioritizing real life over this, especially when its a hobby of yours.
Please keep up the good work.
I have to admit that after seeing an update of this, I had to reread the whole story, and I'm glad that I did. This was a great read and I cannot wait to read more. I don't blame you for prioritizing real life over this, especially when its a hobby of yours.
Please keep up the good work.
6/30/2021 c1 1Nevarus
been a while since I've read this, but I skimmed through the comments and found tons of annoying ones.
mostly ones staying copycat fanon or cliche fanon and complaints about giving Hermione a bunch of books... stfu.
so complaints about giving away the black family library... I don't remember what actually occurs, but if I was the writer there would be the family grimoire. it is the only book that actually matters in the library, as it holds family magic (you know, the secret stuff). everything else would be mostly random old Knowledge and common knowledge (you know, the stuff you get at the bookstore... you idiots).
stop complaining about "copycats" or "cliche" fanons, it's dumb. literally anything could have been copied from somewhere, or it could be similar by coincidence. either way... what is important is the delivery.
been a while since I've read this, but I skimmed through the comments and found tons of annoying ones.
mostly ones staying copycat fanon or cliche fanon and complaints about giving Hermione a bunch of books... stfu.
so complaints about giving away the black family library... I don't remember what actually occurs, but if I was the writer there would be the family grimoire. it is the only book that actually matters in the library, as it holds family magic (you know, the secret stuff). everything else would be mostly random old Knowledge and common knowledge (you know, the stuff you get at the bookstore... you idiots).
stop complaining about "copycats" or "cliche" fanons, it's dumb. literally anything could have been copied from somewhere, or it could be similar by coincidence. either way... what is important is the delivery.
6/30/2021 c21 nurray
Whoops, Harry sent the 600,000 galleons as a "loan" where as you have Amelia stating that harry "donated" the galleons. A donation is NOT paid back.
Either Amelia misspoke or Harry will get a nasty surprise, as he didn't seem to ask for a contract on the repayments.
Whoops, Harry sent the 600,000 galleons as a "loan" where as you have Amelia stating that harry "donated" the galleons. A donation is NOT paid back.
Either Amelia misspoke or Harry will get a nasty surprise, as he didn't seem to ask for a contract on the repayments.
6/25/2021 c35 Guest
yeah soory but the whole harry forgives dumbles thing and the after life please don't put your religus beleafs into fan fics
yeah soory but the whole harry forgives dumbles thing and the after life please don't put your religus beleafs into fan fics
6/27/2021 c30 7Light Lord Cybergate
I hate to say this but...Amelia kind of deserved this.
She was stupid enough to want the ball and be so trusting. Of course Voldy was going to try something.
Sad...and unnecessary loss.
Better have Lord Greengrass become the next Minister fast.
I hate to say this but...Amelia kind of deserved this.
She was stupid enough to want the ball and be so trusting. Of course Voldy was going to try something.
Sad...and unnecessary loss.
Better have Lord Greengrass become the next Minister fast.
6/24/2021 c35 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
6/23/2021 c18 Noy
That chapter actually made me chuckle.
Did Harry Potter, the boy who lived, head of three different houses and the one prophesied to defeat Voldemort said that he was "nothing special" ? That just silly.
The best way to make something appear as poorly hidden bragging is false modesty.
That chapter actually made me chuckle.
Did Harry Potter, the boy who lived, head of three different houses and the one prophesied to defeat Voldemort said that he was "nothing special" ? That just silly.
The best way to make something appear as poorly hidden bragging is false modesty.