
5/26/2021 c13 zxan
its funny how harry broke tradition for the potters and blacks by going neutral followed by slytherin remaining neutral to follow tradition
its funny how harry broke tradition for the potters and blacks by going neutral followed by slytherin remaining neutral to follow tradition
5/20/2021 c35 Guest
This is incredible! This whole fic is just so good! Please keep writing, this whole storyline is absolutely brilliant! Keep going I believe in you!
This is incredible! This whole fic is just so good! Please keep writing, this whole storyline is absolutely brilliant! Keep going I believe in you!
5/21/2021 c35 Noble Korhedron
Will be eagerly waiting for more; I'm excited to see how this plays out...
Will be eagerly waiting for more; I'm excited to see how this plays out...
5/21/2021 c3
2thekecmaster
That's funny, the chief cooks are dressed like the Mario Brothers...that was hilarious!

That's funny, the chief cooks are dressed like the Mario Brothers...that was hilarious!
5/21/2021 c3 Wulfkin17
If you'd like, I'd be happy to clean these chapters up of their grammatical errors. I really enjoy this story and I'd like to help it become the best it could be.
If you'd like, I'd be happy to clean these chapters up of their grammatical errors. I really enjoy this story and I'd like to help it become the best it could be.
5/20/2021 c35 Cateagle
Sucks to be you, Tom and Albus, and it's only going to get worse for Tom as he learns just who had the Elder Wand and who may have it now. It appears that reality is getting ready to really gut Tom.
Sucks to be you, Tom and Albus, and it's only going to get worse for Tom as he learns just who had the Elder Wand and who may have it now. It appears that reality is getting ready to really gut Tom.
5/18/2021 c1 A non mouse
Bella's exit is oddly late, as if author forgot her as Voldy arrival happened.
Readers might go: "huh, is she dead?", then later, appears remark of her portkey exit from atrium due to "bleeding out" gets inserted as a bandaid for wtf happened to her.
Effing ridiculous copycat fanon.
Give Hermione an ancient family library ... just because she's a bookworm.
Harry can effing let her READ, there's NO LOGIC to give her what IS NOW HARRY Black priceless family knowledge and HISTORY.
(with all the knowledge of past house heads, and all the family magic tied to the Black family...TOO BAD THE author didn't give you or the Black decendants the fucking knowlege held in the Black library)
Hmmm, how many galleons per hour, for Molly & Arthur to give room and board?
Another fanfic copycat cliché, drop insane inheritance on Weasleys.
Bella's exit is oddly late, as if author forgot her as Voldy arrival happened.
Readers might go: "huh, is she dead?", then later, appears remark of her portkey exit from atrium due to "bleeding out" gets inserted as a bandaid for wtf happened to her.
Effing ridiculous copycat fanon.
Give Hermione an ancient family library ... just because she's a bookworm.
Harry can effing let her READ, there's NO LOGIC to give her what IS NOW HARRY Black priceless family knowledge and HISTORY.
(with all the knowledge of past house heads, and all the family magic tied to the Black family...TOO BAD THE author didn't give you or the Black decendants the fucking knowlege held in the Black library)
Hmmm, how many galleons per hour, for Molly & Arthur to give room and board?
Another fanfic copycat cliché, drop insane inheritance on Weasleys.
5/18/2021 c35 Ep
Excellent
Merci pour la lecture
Excellent
Merci pour la lecture