5/19/2021 c26 3Herach
(legit question) Do you have dyslexia or are you misspelling the names on purpose? Pretty much every single name has been spelt incorrectly in this fic. The rest is fine but specifically names are more often than not, wrong. Doles, Mrytle, wizengmot etc. etc. Whst is going on?

5/19/2021 c35 1kyuubi ruler of all bijuu
awesome story so far please keep up the good work and write more soon

5/19/2021 c20 The Morphin' Physic4ist
Too many rapid changes in character (Lily & James in this chapter for starters) and plot holes. Harry arranged with the DMLE to pick up all the marked Slytherins and you just dropped it, saying Dumbledore forbade it *after* saying that Dumbledore had no authority to interfere in Slytherin house business. There's far too many of these inconsistencies for me to enjoy this any more.

5/19/2021 c1 Charanko Pebble
I think that the library is the most prized possession of all magical families, especially the really old ones. I mean, that's where they keep their collection of magic stuff, etc., and rare magical tomes that they can use to give their families an advantage. The Blacks might have been dicks, but hundreds of years of work gone just like that...
I am honestly a bit annoyed with this that Sirius gives it away just because Hermione likes to read books... wtf.

5/19/2021 c35 Wolfric
Fine chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

5/18/2021 c35 2Mike Kromer
Must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. can't wait to see what happens next.

5/18/2021 c5 3Herach
This is in Britain. Why in gods name would he casually bring out a shot gun? To bring a loaded shot gun outside your house without proper reason is highly illegal. To even own one you need a licence and a reasonable reason such as a sport or hunting. It is NOT a casual thing to bring when you want to just scare someone.