
9/16/2018 c31 Guest
Update soon please
Update soon please
9/11/2018 c25
1edward kizaru
really? 25000 for a ring? You are telling me that break a curse from an horrocrux is cheaper than a ring with a barrier? is cheaper hire a profesional curse breaker than a simple ring? I understand that you want to make those rings expensive but the magic in those items isnt rare or impresive

really? 25000 for a ring? You are telling me that break a curse from an horrocrux is cheaper than a ring with a barrier? is cheaper hire a profesional curse breaker than a simple ring? I understand that you want to make those rings expensive but the magic in those items isnt rare or impresive
9/4/2018 c31 Guest
Please please continue this, it's one of the best ones I've read yet!
Please please continue this, it's one of the best ones I've read yet!
9/4/2018 c31
8CCSakuraforever
Esta muy bueno el fics más como le fue a harry más que esta usando el poder de sus tres señorios para cambiar el mundo mágico más como esta arruinando los planes del director y voldemort más que pasara en la guerra

Esta muy bueno el fics más como le fue a harry más que esta usando el poder de sus tres señorios para cambiar el mundo mágico más como esta arruinando los planes del director y voldemort más que pasara en la guerra
9/1/2018 c19
1Bukama Stealth
Erm, what about to toss everyone with dark mark into a cell?
And if Dumbledore interferes call it house business?
Aren't there several aurors waiting in Hogsmeade for the signal from Harry?

Erm, what about to toss everyone with dark mark into a cell?
And if Dumbledore interferes call it house business?
Aren't there several aurors waiting in Hogsmeade for the signal from Harry?
8/22/2018 c31
9draconic skysong
Wooh! things seem to be getting interesting. I can't wait to see how things play out in the end.

Wooh! things seem to be getting interesting. I can't wait to see how things play out in the end.
8/11/2018 c31
1Jerm069
I am enjoying this story immensely. I like how certain characters stick to their beliefs and morals despite pressure from outside influences, like Daphne. I wish Dumbledore would have got his comeuppance but oh well. See you next time!

I am enjoying this story immensely. I like how certain characters stick to their beliefs and morals despite pressure from outside influences, like Daphne. I wish Dumbledore would have got his comeuppance but oh well. See you next time!
8/7/2018 c19 SynBen28
wait, why did Harry not go along with his plan to get rid of everyone who is marked? The conversation in Dumbledore's office made it seem like he would just ignore Dumbledore and go ahead with his plan, only he then suddenly decides not to? I'm confused and could really use some more explanation of what happened in Harry's mind.
wait, why did Harry not go along with his plan to get rid of everyone who is marked? The conversation in Dumbledore's office made it seem like he would just ignore Dumbledore and go ahead with his plan, only he then suddenly decides not to? I'm confused and could really use some more explanation of what happened in Harry's mind.
8/7/2018 c18 SynBen28
A few points to fix in this chapter. There is the mention about all of the Weasleys sitting with the 3 Gryffindor chasers, but Ron and Ginny are the only ones still attending Hogwarts, and of the 3 chasers only Katie Bell is still a student at this point. Angelina and Alicia graduated at the end of book 5. Also, prefects are assigned before 5th year, so Malfoy was already a prefect the year before, just like Ron and Hermione. Speaking of, is Hermione still a prefect or did she resign?
A few points to fix in this chapter. There is the mention about all of the Weasleys sitting with the 3 Gryffindor chasers, but Ron and Ginny are the only ones still attending Hogwarts, and of the 3 chasers only Katie Bell is still a student at this point. Angelina and Alicia graduated at the end of book 5. Also, prefects are assigned before 5th year, so Malfoy was already a prefect the year before, just like Ron and Hermione. Speaking of, is Hermione still a prefect or did she resign?
8/5/2018 c24 Incandescent
At the end of this chapter there's a half a sentence cut off and it's not immediately apparent what it's supposed to say.
At the end of this chapter there's a half a sentence cut off and it's not immediately apparent what it's supposed to say.