
10/2/2022 c11 stacygrrl2002
Woo woo! Take that, dimwits! The silk gloves come off and the knuckle dusters go on. Tommy boy and dumbles are gonna get another wake up call!
Woo woo! Take that, dimwits! The silk gloves come off and the knuckle dusters go on. Tommy boy and dumbles are gonna get another wake up call!
9/9/2022 c31
1Nevarus
I doubt voldy would show any amount of trust to anyone that doesn't have his mark.

I doubt voldy would show any amount of trust to anyone that doesn't have his mark.
9/9/2022 c16 Nevarus
not sure why you are writing 5.00 or 1.250 pounds... if it's 500 and 1,250 respectively then that is how it should written. it's wrong to use periods, aka.s, to denote the 3 digit places. a period is used to denote numbers lower than 1... not as a divider. if it's not that, then why are you showing a variable amount of significant figures?
not sure why you are writing 5.00 or 1.250 pounds... if it's 500 and 1,250 respectively then that is how it should written. it's wrong to use periods, aka.s, to denote the 3 digit places. a period is used to denote numbers lower than 1... not as a divider. if it's not that, then why are you showing a variable amount of significant figures?
9/9/2022 c16 Nevarus
I wonder if it's possible for someone to be the target of 2 prophicies at the same time. by this I mean two active ones and where the one that is most likely completed first is like harry's prophecy.
I wonder if it's possible for someone to be the target of 2 prophicies at the same time. by this I mean two active ones and where the one that is most likely completed first is like harry's prophecy.
9/9/2022 c3 Nevarus
so he sent her body flying? that's what the banishing spell does. if not, you are thinking of the vanishing spell
so he sent her body flying? that's what the banishing spell does. if not, you are thinking of the vanishing spell
9/4/2022 c11 Ok
Not necessarily against this idea. Much prefer another fusion of sorts.
(This next section is for the reviewers, not writer.)
Also, to express about those who don’t like someone. That’s your prerogative. However, the fact that you would degrade someone just because you disagree about them or dislike them is horrid.
That, and that everybody makes the absolutely sickening argument about someone “being used too many times” is absolutely disgusting.
Furthermore, for someone to degrade individuals (fiction or not) and then suggest someone else, who is quite likely not a good choice for being one with, as a “companion/ consort”. That’s just nasty.
Sorry, I’ve seen those comments far too often, it is revolting.
Not necessarily against this idea. Much prefer another fusion of sorts.
(This next section is for the reviewers, not writer.)
Also, to express about those who don’t like someone. That’s your prerogative. However, the fact that you would degrade someone just because you disagree about them or dislike them is horrid.
That, and that everybody makes the absolutely sickening argument about someone “being used too many times” is absolutely disgusting.
Furthermore, for someone to degrade individuals (fiction or not) and then suggest someone else, who is quite likely not a good choice for being one with, as a “companion/ consort”. That’s just nasty.
Sorry, I’ve seen those comments far too often, it is revolting.
8/22/2022 c1
6thunderofdeath97
Immediately ruined by a few things.
1.) multi pairing with Luna (who quite frankly i don't really care for, and i am tired of her in harem/multi fics, people need to quit acting like she's a goddess/supermodel) and hermione, (another overused and overrated and overhyped woman in a pairing.)
2.) the black library being given to hermione, is beyond dumb, sorry, but it's true. Sirius literally did Harry wrong here.
3.) Bellatrix and Narcissa could have easily become consorts/concubines (or a labor/sex slave for Bellatrix) due to their crimes, as well helping rebirth house black with 'pure bloods'

Immediately ruined by a few things.
1.) multi pairing with Luna (who quite frankly i don't really care for, and i am tired of her in harem/multi fics, people need to quit acting like she's a goddess/supermodel) and hermione, (another overused and overrated and overhyped woman in a pairing.)
2.) the black library being given to hermione, is beyond dumb, sorry, but it's true. Sirius literally did Harry wrong here.
3.) Bellatrix and Narcissa could have easily become consorts/concubines (or a labor/sex slave for Bellatrix) due to their crimes, as well helping rebirth house black with 'pure bloods'
8/17/2022 c1 Guest
If house rings gave the new head of house all knowledge former heads had, all heads of house would be beyond measure. Very very very unrealistic and destroys immersion.
If house rings gave the new head of house all knowledge former heads had, all heads of house would be beyond measure. Very very very unrealistic and destroys immersion.
7/31/2022 c22 Capros
This is a wonderful story with intriguing character development. Will you be finishing the story? I hope you haven't abandoned it.
This is a wonderful story with intriguing character development. Will you be finishing the story? I hope you haven't abandoned it.
7/29/2022 c1 majikss
this story is like if you took all the worst tropes in hp fanfiction and put it into one story
this story is like if you took all the worst tropes in hp fanfiction and put it into one story
6/26/2022 c5 Cretia
Is this common in western society? Fathers acting intimidating scaring off suitors? What's the point of doing do if they actually want their daughters to be happy? Or do they just want to feel big and strong? Acting like assholes honestly
Is this common in western society? Fathers acting intimidating scaring off suitors? What's the point of doing do if they actually want their daughters to be happy? Or do they just want to feel big and strong? Acting like assholes honestly
6/13/2022 c35 richardrobinsonjr
Nice story, A Harry who is a submissive and who is willing to fight for himself and his family. I look forward to the next chapter.
Again excellent job.
Richard Robinson
Nice story, A Harry who is a submissive and who is willing to fight for himself and his family. I look forward to the next chapter.
Again excellent job.
Richard Robinson