for Alex Rider: Operation Civilian9/23/2017 c4 
20TundrainAfrica
It took you sooo long to update I had to read through everything again. I skimmed through the first few chapters just now but couldn't do much deeper reading since I'm proctoring an exam right now and I should be guarding students not reading but I like your story so yolo. Haha anyway, all I have to say now is, he recovered too fast from that bullet wound. Maybe give him a chapter to recover first? Before shipping him off ? XD: anyway, I could send some more feedback through pm if ya want after I get a good read again at everything anyway, looking forward to more
20TundrainAfricaIt took you sooo long to update I had to read through everything again. I skimmed through the first few chapters just now but couldn't do much deeper reading since I'm proctoring an exam right now and I should be guarding students not reading but I like your story so yolo. Haha anyway, all I have to say now is, he recovered too fast from that bullet wound. Maybe give him a chapter to recover first? Before shipping him off ? XD: anyway, I could send some more feedback through pm if ya want after I get a good read again at everything anyway, looking forward to more
6/27/2017 c3 86TheSilverHunt3r
So glad I found someone who has the standards of not writing slash and smut. Umm, idk, Operations Flare gun? Kudos. God bless.
-Silver
86TheSilverHunt3rSo glad I found someone who has the standards of not writing slash and smut. Umm, idk, Operations Flare gun? Kudos. God bless.
-Silver
5/11/2017 c3 20TundrainAfrica
Hi, I do hope you continue this, I love the dynamic between Alex and tom. Please tell me you plan on doing just that. Btw, you should have someone look through it. There are some typos
20TundrainAfricaHi, I do hope you continue this, I love the dynamic between Alex and tom. Please tell me you plan on doing just that. Btw, you should have someone look through it. There are some typos
4/24/2017 c3 8Riderkitty
Alex is going on a mission after all that?! I feel sorry for the boy. I'm glad that Tom was there for him though.
(I just have 5 more weeks of school then I can write all I want)
8RiderkittyAlex is going on a mission after all that?! I feel sorry for the boy. I'm glad that Tom was there for him though.
(I just have 5 more weeks of school then I can write all I want)
4/8/2017 c2 Riderkitty
This was better than the last chapter! Hopefully you'll improve with every chapter you post! :)
This was better than the last chapter! Hopefully you'll improve with every chapter you post! :)
4/6/2017 c1 10Ava Simbelmyne
hahaha...so to all my readers. I have a new chapter almost finished! I hope to upload it tomorrow... I hope again its all you guys want! Love cons. crit! pls ideas are more than welcome! and any support (follows/favs/reviews) is embraced with tears of joy. (literally) XD
10Ava Simbelmynehahaha...so to all my readers. I have a new chapter almost finished! I hope to upload it tomorrow... I hope again its all you guys want! Love cons. crit! pls ideas are more than welcome! and any support (follows/favs/reviews) is embraced with tears of joy. (literally) XD
4/3/2017 c1 8Riderkitty
I really like this chapter. This is unique writing. I liked the way you made the Sniper sound emotionless, like they are supposed to. There was a few blocky paragraphs that could be separated, but it's not necessary for this. I really liked this story!
8RiderkittyI really like this chapter. This is unique writing. I liked the way you made the Sniper sound emotionless, like they are supposed to. There was a few blocky paragraphs that could be separated, but it's not necessary for this. I really liked this story!