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11/5 c8 6starlite22
Please keep going, also whi is the house of Sullivan.
12/17/2019 c8 21keitaya
Normally I don't like the 'threesome soulbound' schtick but this is well written and I wish that there was more.
1/19/2019 c7 6starlite22
To jumpy for me, moves about to much, without content between, to full in what’s happening. And needs page/scene breaks. Good idea though but needs an edit, and lots of commas adding.
1/19/2019 c6 starlite22
Mostly enjoying it. But hate incomplete sentences “ can we go with?." go with? Go with you, who speaks this way, they certainly wouldnt of done.
12/1/2018 c8 Guest
I hope you find your muse soon. (try using sugar cookies as a trap) I like the story thus far, hope to read more soon.
10/25/2018 c1 5PrianaHalo
so good
10/25/2018 c8 PrianaHalo
This is really good, please update.
10/14/2018 c8 Robin1214
Hoping for the Muse to return soon I can't wait to read more.
9/16/2018 c8 LittleFoot3
is story is great please write more would love to see where it goes
9/11/2018 c8 BratGirl1983
I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update.
8/12/2018 c2 ObsidianCobblestone
This isn't my cup of tea, but I think it's great that you became inspired to write your own stories! It takes a lot of courage to post something you wrote on the internet... something I have yet to do. Also I like Bambi. I won't continue reading because I personally don't like OC/massive character changes and this style isn't for me, but good for you. I did like how you started off with a painting.
8/10/2018 c8 elizabethrose1974
awesome!
8/9/2018 c8 Black Banshee
I'm so glad she didn't string them along but chose to reveal the future. That is, except to Dumbledore.
8/1/2018 c7 Guest
Stumbled across this story this morning liking the plot hope that you’ll continue it
8/1/2018 c7 aradia1967
great chapter can't wait for the next. tell your muse if she disappears again I will hunt her down and tie her to a chair for you. LOL
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