for Kingdom of Broken Hearts8/30/2019 c30 Edges05
I have noticed that your writing has improved, I can tell there is something building! I can't wait to find out what it is, I really enjoy this story your doing an awesome job!
I have noticed that your writing has improved, I can tell there is something building! I can't wait to find out what it is, I really enjoy this story your doing an awesome job!
3/30/2019 c30 
7sailorsenshi13
Hey. It’s been a while. I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope that you’re able to update soon. The end of 358/2 Days is quickly nearing.
7sailorsenshi13Hey. It’s been a while. I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope that you’re able to update soon. The end of 358/2 Days is quickly nearing.
3/10/2019 c30 Anya5544
He-hey, you're back! I was wondering if you were okay, to be honest. It's good to know that you are. And the story-holy shit. You're building up to something, aren't you?
Your writing's definitely improved over the course of the story, and this highlights it. Honestly it felt insanely quality and I couldn't stop reading this chapter.
And really, the darker, more realistic tone for this chapter fit. Things are insanely bleak right now, the deadline hanging over our heroes' heads like this. It also served as a reminder that Alexa literally only knows the plot of 358/2. While I'm pretty sure you know the entire framework of the franchise by now, Alexa doesn't. She doesn't know that Nobodies can actually feel, that they can return, she doesn't know the happy end awaiting the Sea Salt Trio on the canon timeline. It's sad, seeing it sink in.
Hell, it's sad just seeing the reality sink in for her. Alexa clearly has way more than she ever imagined on her shoulders, and she's begun to realize it. You've done a good job writing her.
So I guess the summary of this is-I want to hug Alexa before anything bad happens to her. Which, considering how things have been going, will probably be a short window of time for me to do so.
Faithfully yours,
Anya Homura.
He-hey, you're back! I was wondering if you were okay, to be honest. It's good to know that you are. And the story-holy shit. You're building up to something, aren't you?
Your writing's definitely improved over the course of the story, and this highlights it. Honestly it felt insanely quality and I couldn't stop reading this chapter.
And really, the darker, more realistic tone for this chapter fit. Things are insanely bleak right now, the deadline hanging over our heroes' heads like this. It also served as a reminder that Alexa literally only knows the plot of 358/2. While I'm pretty sure you know the entire framework of the franchise by now, Alexa doesn't. She doesn't know that Nobodies can actually feel, that they can return, she doesn't know the happy end awaiting the Sea Salt Trio on the canon timeline. It's sad, seeing it sink in.
Hell, it's sad just seeing the reality sink in for her. Alexa clearly has way more than she ever imagined on her shoulders, and she's begun to realize it. You've done a good job writing her.
So I guess the summary of this is-I want to hug Alexa before anything bad happens to her. Which, considering how things have been going, will probably be a short window of time for me to do so.
Faithfully yours,
Anya Homura.
3/9/2019 c30 Itachi008
I don't think chapter was depressing, I think it was realistic. Things are getting tense for the 4 friends and Alexa really does need to soon decide something more concrete than a vague "I'll save my friends without sacrificing Sora!", she needs to go over everything she knows about Kingdom Hearts to find clues for possible solutions. My heart pretty much broke for her, Xion and Roxas in this chapter, and I empathised with Axel's frustrations. I think this story is well written! :D
I don't think chapter was depressing, I think it was realistic. Things are getting tense for the 4 friends and Alexa really does need to soon decide something more concrete than a vague "I'll save my friends without sacrificing Sora!", she needs to go over everything she knows about Kingdom Hearts to find clues for possible solutions. My heart pretty much broke for her, Xion and Roxas in this chapter, and I empathised with Axel's frustrations. I think this story is well written! :D
3/7/2019 c30 15FallenAngel10086
Dude, if you keep up with the ominous endings I'm gonna cry and probably throw something at you! My heart cant take it! I may be too emotionally invested now... oh well, at least I'm enjoying your creation! :)
I'm glad you decided to not give up! I'm currently trying not to give up on one of my own fics that I've left for over a year now, and its hard... but! I'm gonna be like you and not give up! (You're kind of inspiring me right now, just so you know.)
Excited for the next chapter! Hope it comes soon!
*~ Fallen~*
15FallenAngel10086Dude, if you keep up with the ominous endings I'm gonna cry and probably throw something at you! My heart cant take it! I may be too emotionally invested now... oh well, at least I'm enjoying your creation! :)
I'm glad you decided to not give up! I'm currently trying not to give up on one of my own fics that I've left for over a year now, and its hard... but! I'm gonna be like you and not give up! (You're kind of inspiring me right now, just so you know.)
Excited for the next chapter! Hope it comes soon!
*~ Fallen~*
3/5/2019 c30 3Chirithy564
Omisgosh you’re back! (Gives you a big welcome back hug!) you’re back! you’re back! you’re back! I’m so glad to see you and Alexa again! And another amazing! I missed this story so much! I was actually rereading it the other day XD lol
This chapter ooooooooooooooh boy! Man time is running out a few more days and it’ll be the final day! I’m so happy that Axel and Xion are helping her out try to change the ending. I know Alexa can think of something to save Roxas and Xion and still help Sora! She’s the hero who never gives up! I believe in her! Also what is Riku waiting for? He could possibly fight Roxas and Alexa but I’m glad he isn’t. (Love ya Riku, but stay where you are and don’t mess everything up.)
And what the heck with the rumors Organization?! They are seriously so nosy. And Xemnas you evil troll! You stay away from Alexa, and her friends!
Also...Roxas. I’m scared that is he finds out about all the lsecrets that Alexa has been keeping from him he’s gonna be so hurt and mad at Alexa. I don’t want him to think he’s been betrayed or anything. She’s trying to save him, if he does find out I just hope he understands...
Anyway! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SOOOOOO MUCH AND THIS STORY! I can’t WAIT to read more of this! I have faith in Alexa and that she will make them have a happy ending! I believe you Alexa!
AN AWESOME CHAPTER! I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT! KEEP THAT AMAZING IMAGINATION FLOWING! :D
3Chirithy564Omisgosh you’re back! (Gives you a big welcome back hug!) you’re back! you’re back! you’re back! I’m so glad to see you and Alexa again! And another amazing! I missed this story so much! I was actually rereading it the other day XD lol
This chapter ooooooooooooooh boy! Man time is running out a few more days and it’ll be the final day! I’m so happy that Axel and Xion are helping her out try to change the ending. I know Alexa can think of something to save Roxas and Xion and still help Sora! She’s the hero who never gives up! I believe in her! Also what is Riku waiting for? He could possibly fight Roxas and Alexa but I’m glad he isn’t. (Love ya Riku, but stay where you are and don’t mess everything up.)
And what the heck with the rumors Organization?! They are seriously so nosy. And Xemnas you evil troll! You stay away from Alexa, and her friends!
Also...Roxas. I’m scared that is he finds out about all the lsecrets that Alexa has been keeping from him he’s gonna be so hurt and mad at Alexa. I don’t want him to think he’s been betrayed or anything. She’s trying to save him, if he does find out I just hope he understands...
Anyway! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SOOOOOO MUCH AND THIS STORY! I can’t WAIT to read more of this! I have faith in Alexa and that she will make them have a happy ending! I believe you Alexa!
AN AWESOME CHAPTER! I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT! KEEP THAT AMAZING IMAGINATION FLOWING! :D
3/5/2019 c30 2coolmegan123
You're back! ! ! I'm so happy! *cries* I'm so happy you're writing again! You can do it, no matter what! Btw, I loved that line where Alexa was like, maybe they all get happy endings later on...? Haha, foreshadowing! I'm SO HAPPY you're back, and can't wait to read the end of this story! Keep it up! :D
2coolmegan123You're back! ! ! I'm so happy! *cries* I'm so happy you're writing again! You can do it, no matter what! Btw, I loved that line where Alexa was like, maybe they all get happy endings later on...? Haha, foreshadowing! I'm SO HAPPY you're back, and can't wait to read the end of this story! Keep it up! :D
2/21/2019 c29 Guest
Hope to see more.
I do hope that Alexa will be told that Sora will one day save both Roxas and Xion.
Hope to see more.
I do hope that Alexa will be told that Sora will one day save both Roxas and Xion.
10/26/2018 c29 Guest
Hope to see more soon!
Hope to see more soon!
9/16/2018 c29 Guest
Hope to see more!
Hope to see more!
5/26/2018 c29 8The Keeper of Worlds
Less than forty days left. Clock is ticking and danger is rising!
8The Keeper of WorldsLess than forty days left. Clock is ticking and danger is rising!
3/31/2018 c16 2SuperCow64
Reading Kingdom of Broken Hearts is like traveling into the video game, right beside Alexa as she fights heartless. I feel like I'm on the clock tower with the sea-salt trio as they eat sea-salt ice cream. I love everything about this fanfiction, it's fabulous! I can remember the day I read the first chapter, and it was amazing, I was hooked from the beginning. I'm really excited to see how this story unfolds. :-) This has to be one of the best fanfictions I've read, EVER. It's amazing, and I hope everyone else enjoys it as much as I do. :D
2SuperCow64Reading Kingdom of Broken Hearts is like traveling into the video game, right beside Alexa as she fights heartless. I feel like I'm on the clock tower with the sea-salt trio as they eat sea-salt ice cream. I love everything about this fanfiction, it's fabulous! I can remember the day I read the first chapter, and it was amazing, I was hooked from the beginning. I'm really excited to see how this story unfolds. :-) This has to be one of the best fanfictions I've read, EVER. It's amazing, and I hope everyone else enjoys it as much as I do. :D
3/25/2018 c29 Guest
Hey, maybe when Alexa comes back to the castle from a mission, she seem a little bitter as she's heading for her room. Seeing her return from her mission, Saix, in his usual voice, tells her ( you decide ), but what he says annoys Alexa, that she sharply turn her head and glare at him. The second she do, Saix stops talking, lets out a silent gasp of surprise, and drops a report he was holding. Realizing that her ability had kicked in again, Alexa turn her head away from Saix while holding a hand to her head. Not wanting to look at anyone, in slight fear of activating her ability again, Alexa runs out of the room. She finds a good balcony spot, outside the castle, sits down and sulks while looking up at Kingdom Hearts.
Hey, maybe when Alexa comes back to the castle from a mission, she seem a little bitter as she's heading for her room. Seeing her return from her mission, Saix, in his usual voice, tells her ( you decide ), but what he says annoys Alexa, that she sharply turn her head and glare at him. The second she do, Saix stops talking, lets out a silent gasp of surprise, and drops a report he was holding. Realizing that her ability had kicked in again, Alexa turn her head away from Saix while holding a hand to her head. Not wanting to look at anyone, in slight fear of activating her ability again, Alexa runs out of the room. She finds a good balcony spot, outside the castle, sits down and sulks while looking up at Kingdom Hearts.