for Capturing Her Damaged Heart10/31 c83 Ch33t4hP4w
I read this story in about a week. 83 really long chapters. Couldn’t get enough. I really loved having Lucy and Natsu interact. The close calls, figuring out what they mean to each other.. your world building has also been great. I really enjoyed it seeing as how I got all the way to then end. I also noticed your writing as a whole develop, so that was nice to see! You had me with some LOL moments and having things from the anime / manga has been great to read.
I am going to vent now, and I apologize.
I’m sorry, I know it’s a slow burn, but this is… crazy. I can get over the near kiss, but the full rejection after Lucy finally, FINALLY confesses? Ya know, the canon anime / manga is already doing the slow, Slow, AGONIZINGLY SLOW burn with NaLu, but this is worse because we are reading fanfiction to escape that and for them to, ya know, actually get together. I guess it hurts to have the acknowledgement “zombie apocalypse- might die but let’s at least find someone to love” kinda thing over and over again only for the characters to have pretty silly hangups. Idk maybe I’m older, less shy or whatever but to constantly deny liking someone, even if it ruins a friendship, and being all shy about the subject was getting silly after like chapter 50 I think. And the over analyzing thing was getting to nails on chalkboard level for the last 20 chapters. To be fair, I guess men could just BE like that, but it feels pretty off for Natsu. Don't get me wrong, the dense thing is perfect and so in character, I think he would need to have it spelled out, but once that happens? A THREE WEEK timeskip after that confession? Yeah sorry I’m feeling… I’m gonna need to take a walk after this one.
Side note, regarding the slow burn in canon, I’m in love with the theory that Natsu thinks him and Lucy are already dating while Lucy has no idea, just thinking he’s a friend or whatever… probably not realistic but like.. it helps me sleep at night.
Anyway… nice job. You got me all fired up over your writing so that’s good I guess.
I read this story in about a week. 83 really long chapters. Couldn’t get enough. I really loved having Lucy and Natsu interact. The close calls, figuring out what they mean to each other.. your world building has also been great. I really enjoyed it seeing as how I got all the way to then end. I also noticed your writing as a whole develop, so that was nice to see! You had me with some LOL moments and having things from the anime / manga has been great to read.
I am going to vent now, and I apologize.
I’m sorry, I know it’s a slow burn, but this is… crazy. I can get over the near kiss, but the full rejection after Lucy finally, FINALLY confesses? Ya know, the canon anime / manga is already doing the slow, Slow, AGONIZINGLY SLOW burn with NaLu, but this is worse because we are reading fanfiction to escape that and for them to, ya know, actually get together. I guess it hurts to have the acknowledgement “zombie apocalypse- might die but let’s at least find someone to love” kinda thing over and over again only for the characters to have pretty silly hangups. Idk maybe I’m older, less shy or whatever but to constantly deny liking someone, even if it ruins a friendship, and being all shy about the subject was getting silly after like chapter 50 I think. And the over analyzing thing was getting to nails on chalkboard level for the last 20 chapters. To be fair, I guess men could just BE like that, but it feels pretty off for Natsu. Don't get me wrong, the dense thing is perfect and so in character, I think he would need to have it spelled out, but once that happens? A THREE WEEK timeskip after that confession? Yeah sorry I’m feeling… I’m gonna need to take a walk after this one.
Side note, regarding the slow burn in canon, I’m in love with the theory that Natsu thinks him and Lucy are already dating while Lucy has no idea, just thinking he’s a friend or whatever… probably not realistic but like.. it helps me sleep at night.
Anyway… nice job. You got me all fired up over your writing so that’s good I guess.
10/28 c83 user
also saw someone mention a go fund me, not lying i would contribute to that as well to continue this story. i know writing/editing takes time and you work a lot already. i pay for books at b&n, i’d pay for this literature too!
also saw someone mention a go fund me, not lying i would contribute to that as well to continue this story. i know writing/editing takes time and you work a lot already. i pay for books at b&n, i’d pay for this literature too!
10/28 c83 user
this is story is so amazing and you’re such a talented writer. please ignore the haters! i hope one day you are able to come back to this story, even if it wasn’t consistent. just when you find the time and motivation. hope you are doing well! thank you for sharing this w the world!
this is story is so amazing and you’re such a talented writer. please ignore the haters! i hope one day you are able to come back to this story, even if it wasn’t consistent. just when you find the time and motivation. hope you are doing well! thank you for sharing this w the world!
9/7 c1 Leelee2234
I miss this story so much. I hope it is not abandoned! I hope u come back to this story someday
I miss this story so much. I hope it is not abandoned! I hope u come back to this story someday
7/31 c83 Lovesmutbabe
Truly love this story, re-read it all over again and it's really one of the best fics I've ever read. Hope you're doing well! I'm holding out hope that you'll continue this story, no doubt. Will be waiting for your return! May you be well :)
Truly love this story, re-read it all over again and it's really one of the best fics I've ever read. Hope you're doing well! I'm holding out hope that you'll continue this story, no doubt. Will be waiting for your return! May you be well :)
6/25 c1 DREAMCHASlNG
Just finished re-reading and its still one of my fave ft fics out there. I have seen your notes and its truly devasting but a part of me still wants to hope that you will continue this in the future and go back to writing
Just finished re-reading and its still one of my fave ft fics out there. I have seen your notes and its truly devasting but a part of me still wants to hope that you will continue this in the future and go back to writing
6/24 c79 TheProcastinatingPerfectionist
I honestly love this story so much but the way you dumb down your characters in the end is making my eyes twitch. Why does suddenly everyone has the emotional intelligence of a tea spoon? Unnecessary drama… sure it’s a fanfic but it’s a great story, why are you dragging this? Only have so much patience here. He jerks off to her but he’s too slow to realize he likes her. Hibiki asks him if he likes her, this man says no to then says but you can’t date her. Ridiculous…I’ll finish it because I made it this far and I honestly love your writing this style the plot is killing my brain cells.
I honestly love this story so much but the way you dumb down your characters in the end is making my eyes twitch. Why does suddenly everyone has the emotional intelligence of a tea spoon? Unnecessary drama… sure it’s a fanfic but it’s a great story, why are you dragging this? Only have so much patience here. He jerks off to her but he’s too slow to realize he likes her. Hibiki asks him if he likes her, this man says no to then says but you can’t date her. Ridiculous…I’ll finish it because I made it this far and I honestly love your writing this style the plot is killing my brain cells.
5/29 c83 PLEASE READ
IM BEGGING PLEASE START A GO FUND ME, I HAVE MONEY WITH YIUR NAME ON IT, I NEED MORE AND I CANT TAKE IT, I WILL GIVE YOU EVERYTHING I OWN
IM BEGGING PLEASE START A GO FUND ME, I HAVE MONEY WITH YIUR NAME ON IT, I NEED MORE AND I CANT TAKE IT, I WILL GIVE YOU EVERYTHING I OWN
5/16 c40 Big big fan
I believe this is the best piece of literature I’ve ever read in my life, if I could replace the Bible with this I would. This makes me want to erect a statue in your honor and warship you til the end of time. Pls win the lottery.
I believe this is the best piece of literature I’ve ever read in my life, if I could replace the Bible with this I would. This makes me want to erect a statue in your honor and warship you til the end of time. Pls win the lottery.
4/1 c1 Leelee2234
This was one of my favorite stories. I hope you come back to this some day! I was really interested in how this all turns out.
This was one of my favorite stories. I hope you come back to this some day! I was really interested in how this all turns out.
71/10 c83 Flor de cerezoNFTLC
Hi! Its bien a while since you updated the story and I Washington wonderiung how are you doing, ir you are okay? I hope you know that eversiones is cheering you on, that you are amazing. With you Luck and hopefully read us soon.
Hi! Its bien a while since you updated the story and I Washington wonderiung how are you doing, ir you are okay? I hope you know that eversiones is cheering you on, that you are amazing. With you Luck and hopefully read us soon.