for Help Me7/10/2018 c1 Firework's Feelings
I need another chapter soon. This is way too intriguing to Judy be a forgotten story.
I need another chapter soon. This is way too intriguing to Judy be a forgotten story.
4/9/2017 c1 
47Angelus Erreare
Awful. But I'm sure you already knew that. Not sure if you're being deliberate because your other fics are in better shape than this one. But still, more Ichihime is always welcome.
47Angelus ErreareAwful. But I'm sure you already knew that. Not sure if you're being deliberate because your other fics are in better shape than this one. But still, more Ichihime is always welcome.
4/6/2017 c1 Kratos the great
Sweet merciful mother of sweet baby Jesus. My little cousins write better than this shit fix.
Sweet merciful mother of sweet baby Jesus. My little cousins write better than this shit fix.
4/6/2017 c1 C J
No sex scenes? Boring
No sex scenes? Boring
4/6/2017 c1 21daianapotter
creo que has mejorado en tu redaccion n.n
ya no es tan apresurado como en otras ocasiones.
estaria bueno una segunda parte n.n
21daianapottercreo que has mejorado en tu redaccion n.n
ya no es tan apresurado como en otras ocasiones.
estaria bueno una segunda parte n.n