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8/23 c2 Jack
Yo when Is chapter 3 coming out
4/15 c2 Tilty.bbb
This was a fantastic start well done
8/15/2019 c2 BorderLand
Ok this is likely the best Kirito I read about. Cold, manipulative and extremely smart to the point Kayaba would have gotten along perfectly with him of he didn't trap him in SAO.

This is what I call a hight functioning sociopath.
7/27/2019 c1 Tsolda
This is good. I rarely find good fanfictions with the protagonist as a dark character. Keep it up.
4/17/2019 c2 black deamon
make more
2/23/2019 c2 Shirou02
I like this version of Kirito. It makes me look forward to the next chapter.
2/2/2019 c2 Ryoji Mochizuki
o.O
1/28/2019 c2 3Verdauga
Damn. That's intense.
1/4/2019 c2 1Alex Focker
This version of kirito is kind of badass, damn now I'm on the edge waiting for more.
1/1/2019 c2 3renextronex
wow, this is grimm, I really want to read the rest
8/10/2018 c2 1HaruSutomutaiga9900
Well dam(n)... That was super dark... I love it
7/9/2018 c2 SentinalSlice
I like how effective this Kirito is. He is observing everything, and is already making progress towards whatever goal he has. Anyways, keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next update, so please update soon.
6/20/2018 c2 wormrepo
Kirito smiled at the dark rage on the faces of Sirzechs's, of Serafall's and of the devastation on Rias's.

"Why? Why did you do this?" Sirzechs asks while barely holding himself back from killing the wretched monster that his precious little sister brought into the family.

"To prove that I am no ones slave, that I am free. I set the other slaves of this so called peerage free too in the only way that was available after so much brainwashing and manipulation you have put them through." Kirito said with a smile still on his face.

Gesturing to the dead bodies of not only Rias's peerage but also Sona's he continued on "There is a reason all of the old tales told of deals, of agreements. You took something that didn't belong to you Rias and for that there are consequences." He explained in a clam tone, not at all bothered by his approaching death.

"The only way to truly make a point is to shake as much of the foundation of this horrible slavery as possible. Freeing the peerage of the two little siblings of Maou's that also adore those siblings so is a catalyst." Kirito went on to explain with a tilt of the head towards the dead.

"They can't have it happen again, and if can happen to them it can happen to anyone. Will it be just this next time? Or will it be even worse? I am the ignition that will set ablaze the Underworld in another civil war if the ways aren't changed." He raised his arms out to the sides to show how encompassing this would be.

"So come oh Satan and Leviathan. Come create a martyr or let the killer of your families live to speak up with the hope for all of those enslaved to be set free. Let the world know how it was the current system, the current abuse and gluttony that let the system fail. Let all know that on this day I Am Free." Kirito finished with a large grin as he grabbed his bloodied blades for the no doubt short battle to come.

"But tell me one thing first Rias.. How does it feel knowing you will now have to spend the rest of your unnaturally long life with what has happened? With how you are now the bride of a man that seems to have no real morals and will no doubt spend many a nights raping you? How does it feel to know it was thanks to me you are now a slave just as you made me one, yet your own slaves are free?" He asked but before Rias could say a thing energy exploded out of Sirzechs as he couldn't contain his rage any longer.

"And. Here. We. Go." Kirito said softly as he watched death approach.

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I want the above so badly you all don't understand. I have never seen a DxD story where the like happened to Rias or Sona and it makes no bleeding sense at all. I have seen people run from her, verbally assault her, fight her but never just do something like this.

It is a shame that it is unlikely to ever happen in a meaningful way. Would be nice if that was part three with part four being the finish that cleans things up in the aftermath.
6/1/2018 c2 Zahndrekh
I love Dark Kirito cold and calculating. it's a nice changement compared to all the fanfictions/crossovers or Kirito plays the role of the knight in shining armor

your fanfiction has a lot of potential, I hope isn't abandoned that you plan to continue it, too update soon if possible please
4/14/2018 c2 dragonsword1000
I hope you continue this, it's really different from the other stories.
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