for The Party10/31/2022 c1 Guest
You obviously put a whole lotta effort into this headcanon about Leni being Lily's biological mother, and I appreciate that. This fanfic is obviously incomplete, so I hope you are able to return to this and your other Blooming Lily fics sometime soon.
I don't know when exactly you're gonna read this TerraZeal, but I hope you have a good day and that you're safe. 3
You obviously put a whole lotta effort into this headcanon about Leni being Lily's biological mother, and I appreciate that. This fanfic is obviously incomplete, so I hope you are able to return to this and your other Blooming Lily fics sometime soon.
I don't know when exactly you're gonna read this TerraZeal, but I hope you have a good day and that you're safe. 3
10/29/2022 c1 Guest
I just wanted to say that this entire series is very good and interesting. It's almost like a dramatic reimagining of the original Loud House, one that doesn't come off as an attempt to be "edgy" or whatever (no offense to other Loud House fic writers out there who write that kind of stuff).
I think that a lot of the concepts here, like Leni pretending to be stupid so others feel better about themselves, Lincoln having some form of ADHD, etc etc, are pretty neat and I would definitely read more about them. I can't help but feel bad for Leni, what she's trying to do, and the fact that she's obviously dealing with some insecurities. At least Carol is there as one of her friends.
The whole AU is amazing, and while Leni having sex at 15 is a bit squeamish, it portrays the idea of hiding a teen pregnancy and making the baby seem like the teen's younger sibling as emotionally wrecking yet hopeful. It's a sentimental storyline that I want to read and maybe even write more of in the future.
Hopefully you will return to these fics and expand more on who exactly Lily's (biological) father is, how he and Leni reunited, and what they and Lily are doing several years later.
I just wanted to say that this entire series is very good and interesting. It's almost like a dramatic reimagining of the original Loud House, one that doesn't come off as an attempt to be "edgy" or whatever (no offense to other Loud House fic writers out there who write that kind of stuff).
I think that a lot of the concepts here, like Leni pretending to be stupid so others feel better about themselves, Lincoln having some form of ADHD, etc etc, are pretty neat and I would definitely read more about them. I can't help but feel bad for Leni, what she's trying to do, and the fact that she's obviously dealing with some insecurities. At least Carol is there as one of her friends.
The whole AU is amazing, and while Leni having sex at 15 is a bit squeamish, it portrays the idea of hiding a teen pregnancy and making the baby seem like the teen's younger sibling as emotionally wrecking yet hopeful. It's a sentimental storyline that I want to read and maybe even write more of in the future.
Hopefully you will return to these fics and expand more on who exactly Lily's (biological) father is, how he and Leni reunited, and what they and Lily are doing several years later.
6/7/2022 c1 Guest
This sounds like a great fic and I hope you finish it sometime soon! Can't wait for you to reveal Lily's father!
This sounds like a great fic and I hope you finish it sometime soon! Can't wait for you to reveal Lily's father!
4/16/2022 c1 BG
Lincoln doesnt have ADHD
Lincoln doesnt have ADHD
4/9/2017 c1 
587Exotos135
I like the direction of Leni and Carol's relationship, it really is sad that in canon, Leni's one of the sisters who we don't know if she even has any friends, without a plausible reason (Lisa is Lisa, Luan's jokes aren't for everybody, Lori is Lori, Lola is Lola, Lucy's macabre likes is sometihng very few would like, Lynn is Lynn, and so on)
Anyhow, we've finally reached the party, and once enough time passes...
It's a Leni! It's a Leni! It's a Leni-house party!
Anyway, keep up the good work. :)
587Exotos135I like the direction of Leni and Carol's relationship, it really is sad that in canon, Leni's one of the sisters who we don't know if she even has any friends, without a plausible reason (Lisa is Lisa, Luan's jokes aren't for everybody, Lori is Lori, Lola is Lola, Lucy's macabre likes is sometihng very few would like, Lynn is Lynn, and so on)
Anyhow, we've finally reached the party, and once enough time passes...
It's a Leni! It's a Leni! It's a Leni-house party!
Anyway, keep up the good work. :)
4/8/2017 c1 221celrock
Nice start to this story. Looking forward to reading more!
Keep up the great writing!
221celrockNice start to this story. Looking forward to reading more!
Keep up the great writing!
4/8/2017 c1 8Trainalf
I think that other reviewer confused your story with another called 'A Blooming Lily' that popped up soon after your 'The Blooming Lily' as an obvious copy cat. I don't recommend looking it up.
On to the actual review, I've been reading everything from his little AU universe you've set up. All of it is very well written and despite the subject matter manages to have good mixes of drama, comedy, and heartwarming. Very good characterization all around.
8TrainalfI think that other reviewer confused your story with another called 'A Blooming Lily' that popped up soon after your 'The Blooming Lily' as an obvious copy cat. I don't recommend looking it up.
On to the actual review, I've been reading everything from his little AU universe you've set up. All of it is very well written and despite the subject matter manages to have good mixes of drama, comedy, and heartwarming. Very good characterization all around.
4/8/2017 c1 117TerraZeal
To the person who thinks Lori and Lincoln are the parents of Lily in Blooming, there is not even a hint of this so you can't possibly have read the story! The last chapter in fact details Leni giving birth to Lily!
Thank you for the review, but I just wanted to clear that up. There is no way Lincoln and Lori could be the parents, and I never even thought of how ick that would be! XD
117TerraZealTo the person who thinks Lori and Lincoln are the parents of Lily in Blooming, there is not even a hint of this so you can't possibly have read the story! The last chapter in fact details Leni giving birth to Lily!
Thank you for the review, but I just wanted to clear that up. There is no way Lincoln and Lori could be the parents, and I never even thought of how ick that would be! XD
4/8/2017 c1 biginferno
Great chapter but I am confused now in the blooming Lily Lincoln and Lori are the parents of Lily but in this story you have leni as Lily's mother instead of Lori
Great chapter but I am confused now in the blooming Lily Lincoln and Lori are the parents of Lily but in this story you have leni as Lily's mother instead of Lori