
1/14/2024 c12 dirtybirdmmm
So do people really just copy the whole movie/show there writing about word for word bc so far that’s what I’m seeing no creativity at all like come on my guy at least try and make it your own you just robbed the movie and expect us to give you some sort of achievement or acknowledged that you wrote this in your own words this is at least 90% a copy paste story with only 10% creativity now I see why a lot of people I know don’t like fanfiction bc of this reason and that’s most of fanfics on here
So do people really just copy the whole movie/show there writing about word for word bc so far that’s what I’m seeing no creativity at all like come on my guy at least try and make it your own you just robbed the movie and expect us to give you some sort of achievement or acknowledged that you wrote this in your own words this is at least 90% a copy paste story with only 10% creativity now I see why a lot of people I know don’t like fanfiction bc of this reason and that’s most of fanfics on here
1/14/2024 c13 dirtybirdmmm
This story makes zero sense so Naruto stayed there for over 8 thousand years and he only had enough chakra to do only the clone technique and the one that hides your identity and fun fact
Only jonin/chunin use the shadow clone technique bc of how much chakra it eats up so far that technically won’t work with your Naruto and Kurama was holding Naruto’s chakra back by a ton I hope you know that but from this fanfic you obviously don’t know that
This story makes zero sense so Naruto stayed there for over 8 thousand years and he only had enough chakra to do only the clone technique and the one that hides your identity and fun fact
Only jonin/chunin use the shadow clone technique bc of how much chakra it eats up so far that technically won’t work with your Naruto and Kurama was holding Naruto’s chakra back by a ton I hope you know that but from this fanfic you obviously don’t know that
8/29/2023 c13 Grinch
Still waiting in a update
Still waiting in a update
2/18/2023 c3 Guest
Jajajajajaja realmente me da risa como Naruto se comporta como si fuera un niño tímido y que se sorprende por todo, pero entiendo que debe ocultar las apariencias hasta llegar
Jajajajajaja realmente me da risa como Naruto se comporta como si fuera un niño tímido y que se sorprende por todo, pero entiendo que debe ocultar las apariencias hasta llegar
6/13/2021 c13
86KristinalUzumakiPrime23
that is great news, er, not to change the subject but um how are your hands?

that is great news, er, not to change the subject but um how are your hands?