for Blood Trail of Alucard10/20/2024 c77 Carlom2408
You ruined the ending for me.
I can handle the idea of Zeeshi and Talia but not a full harem!
You ruined the ending for me.
I can handle the idea of Zeeshi and Talia but not a full harem!
4/27/2023 c2 Guest
Bruh was is he acting like a slave/object towards ainz
Bruh was is he acting like a slave/object towards ainz
4/4/2022 c1 faz551
A good Overlord fanfic with an OC simply doesn't exist on this website... This one is again pure trash.
A good Overlord fanfic with an OC simply doesn't exist on this website... This one is again pure trash.
12/11/2021 c52 Carlom2408
Touka was in the room chosen by the Brides, using her hands to cover Nyx's ears, all the while cursing how lucky Zesshi and Talia were.
ah quiet I'm sure you too will have the opportunity to show off.
Touka was in the room chosen by the Brides, using her hands to cover Nyx's ears, all the while cursing how lucky Zesshi and Talia were.
ah quiet I'm sure you too will have the opportunity to show off.
9/23/2021 c1 Volunteer Insomniac
why's he such an asshole? he doesn't have to be so rude, yelling at everyone.
why's he such an asshole? he doesn't have to be so rude, yelling at everyone.
5/10/2021 c8 ZhaWarudo
Still no character development, I gave it more of a chance because I loved your other fic God of a New World but they are world apart in quality, I guess this one was your first or close. Lets get this straight, player meets another player in another world, they talk for a minute and just say they gotta act though, that's it. Why is your character even called Alucard? I got into this fic thinking it be cool to read about actual Alucard in Overlord, I got some dude growling and hissing at everything while the only thing having in common with real Alucard is being vampires(which is pretty vague nowdays). Other than that it's written like a xianxia, everything is rushed. Grammar is at best tolerable and I saw some other reviews so I'll save myself the trouble and stop here.
Still no character development, I gave it more of a chance because I loved your other fic God of a New World but they are world apart in quality, I guess this one was your first or close. Lets get this straight, player meets another player in another world, they talk for a minute and just say they gotta act though, that's it. Why is your character even called Alucard? I got into this fic thinking it be cool to read about actual Alucard in Overlord, I got some dude growling and hissing at everything while the only thing having in common with real Alucard is being vampires(which is pretty vague nowdays). Other than that it's written like a xianxia, everything is rushed. Grammar is at best tolerable and I saw some other reviews so I'll save myself the trouble and stop here.
5/8/2021 c1 
1Killer999
Just no. This fic had so much promise. But Alucard time and again gets made the fool. First he get mind controlled which is understandable. But then he goes into fucking having a assassination attempts made on him by Albedo and mentioned NOTHING to Ainz? Then is poisoned and still says nothing after being BASICALLY MIND CONTROLLED AND IS UNDEAD WHICH MEANS HE CAN'T UNLESS ITS A WORLD ITEM. This guy is a fucking dumbass. I stopped reading here and after looking through the reviews I'm glad. He seems to get stupider and stupider as time goes on my god. This guy is no fucking special ops operative. He's a goddamn pushover, he's stupid, and does nothing but cause himself issues. What a fucking stupid story.
1Killer999Just no. This fic had so much promise. But Alucard time and again gets made the fool. First he get mind controlled which is understandable. But then he goes into fucking having a assassination attempts made on him by Albedo and mentioned NOTHING to Ainz? Then is poisoned and still says nothing after being BASICALLY MIND CONTROLLED AND IS UNDEAD WHICH MEANS HE CAN'T UNLESS ITS A WORLD ITEM. This guy is a fucking dumbass. I stopped reading here and after looking through the reviews I'm glad. He seems to get stupider and stupider as time goes on my god. This guy is no fucking special ops operative. He's a goddamn pushover, he's stupid, and does nothing but cause himself issues. What a fucking stupid story.
1/27/2021 c1 Thoughts
I expected Momonga to freak out and scramble to go find Alucard when he learned that he was in the same world. Isnt he supposed to be super obsessed with his friends? He seems really dismissive of the possibility that a friend of his is in the new world.
Other thoughts:
Dialogue is a bit iffy but it kinda works out. Im guessing you didnt bother to change the miswordings on purpose so ill leave it at that.
I expected Momonga to freak out and scramble to go find Alucard when he learned that he was in the same world. Isnt he supposed to be super obsessed with his friends? He seems really dismissive of the possibility that a friend of his is in the new world.
Other thoughts:
Dialogue is a bit iffy but it kinda works out. Im guessing you didnt bother to change the miswordings on purpose so ill leave it at that.