for ezbine9/7/2019 c1 CrimsonFker101
Not bad for a first fanfic, but remember that in all writing, detail is the key.
Not bad for a first fanfic, but remember that in all writing, detail is the key.
6/12/2019 c1 Guest
yes,very good
yes,very good
8/7/2018 c1 Tigercommander15
I think it's fantastic I have been writing my own stories but it took place after rebels season 4 and on it continued it chapter 15 Sabine trying to find Ezra so she seeks an old friend for help but he was missing too so she need to find him because he had something that could help her find Ezra but I'm still working on it but I would love to hear more of your stories so keep up the good work
I think it's fantastic I have been writing my own stories but it took place after rebels season 4 and on it continued it chapter 15 Sabine trying to find Ezra so she seeks an old friend for help but he was missing too so she need to find him because he had something that could help her find Ezra but I'm still working on it but I would love to hear more of your stories so keep up the good work
9/19/2017 c1 
10SkeletonKnight
I understand that this is your first Fic, so I'm gonna give you some pointers instead of saying this story is terrible. When writing out dialogue, instead of putting it in the middle of the paragraph, which is a problem a lot of new authors have, put it outside the paragraph or it will be hard to read.
Another thing is grammar. When writing you should be sure to capitalize the first word of the sentence & proper nouns like names & places.
One final thing, don't shove everything into one paragraph. This makes it very tedious to read. You will find yourself reading the same sentence on you won't realize that a new one started, so you'll go back to restart the previous one to find out where the new one started. This made it where I couldn't even read this fic. I hope these tips help you out.
10SkeletonKnightI understand that this is your first Fic, so I'm gonna give you some pointers instead of saying this story is terrible. When writing out dialogue, instead of putting it in the middle of the paragraph, which is a problem a lot of new authors have, put it outside the paragraph or it will be hard to read.
Another thing is grammar. When writing you should be sure to capitalize the first word of the sentence & proper nouns like names & places.
One final thing, don't shove everything into one paragraph. This makes it very tedious to read. You will find yourself reading the same sentence on you won't realize that a new one started, so you'll go back to restart the previous one to find out where the new one started. This made it where I couldn't even read this fic. I hope these tips help you out.