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11/13 c45 yomobo06
thank you for the awesome chapters and I hope you have a wonderful week
11/13 c45 34Dragonhulk
This was the best part of waking up today, but I have to wonder when Salem got black hair. Maybe she died it?
11/13 c45 RiverOffers
Yes, so good. This is of my favorite stories, thank you.

Really looking forward to the next update.
11/13 c45 Aion27
So Xander gets to met and help another immortal woman that has a lot of blood on her hands. He still somehow attracts them wherever he goes. Thanks for the chapter it is quite fun to read
11/13 c45 Shandrakor
well Salem, one way or another, you're likely getting free of your curse, how depends on how diplomatic your feeling. Also, when Xander made that regen ring, he he do it the old way because he forgot or on purpose, I wonder. I mean he can use one mana for a bunch of rings then charge them.
11/13 c45 Navn Ukjent
I look forward to seeing the meetings between Xander, Ozpin and Salem.

I don't think there are any problems on Remnant that could'nt be handled by a few Asgardian battleships.
11/13 c45 Terracotta Tortilla
Hmm, the two immortals who want to die have noticed Xander. If it wasn't you writing this, I'd be worried about an incoming tone shift. It will probably still be comedy.

Good chapter.
11/13 c45 Barbaric Bob
Salem: I need ya to merc me
Xander: wha?
Salem: c'mon, just god magic me away, pretty please?
Xander: This has been the weirdest request I've gotten so far
11/13 c45 brayanamaya963
me ha sorprendido a la actualización número 45 porque vamos está fantástica y ya quiero ver como como chocan los dos viejos inmortales contra el pobre Alexanders qué maravilla me emociona tanto pero tanto oh que no puedo contener mis palabras en estas letras mi emoción mi alegría mi expectación esperaré con mucha ansia pero con mucha el siguiente capítulo de esta gran obra porque una de las mejores que he leído en los últimos 10 años o más yo te mando saludo desde Madrid España que tengas salud prosperidad bienestar y que todo te salga muy bien hasta luego querido autor
11/13 c45 Joshua the Hand-Written
Why is Salem's hair black? Didn't she go from blonde to white?
That is a very good explanation for the boob related cliffhanger of last chapter.
I hadn't thought about the two grown children possibly detecting Xander pulling shenanigans. I'm sure that will all go well...
11/13 c45 jaimyahoo
I can see Salem ended up joining Xander in his journey home if he can dispel her curse. Would moon healing escalation do that?
11/13 c45 ImaginativeFury
the whole thing about his summons getting sentience or some crap and he not unsommoning them or making ringa for the temporary robots is annoying. same as him always always e,plaining everything in full detail
11/13 c45 Tribernator
This could get interesting. I wonder, do any of xanders skills let him fight gods? I get the feeling they may get involved soon.
11/13 c45 sid99
holy shit...do you know how easy it will be for Xander to free Salem of her curse? once that is gone, she will calm down and he will have another ally...cause she is still one of the strongest magic users and once he scans her :D plus she can teach him so many spells
11/13 c45 firelordeg
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows
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