
7/4/2021 c13 non ikarishipper
you know you made dawn ooc. she would never in million years act with paul in such friendly manner if you continued the story on basis on anime she would be touchy or playful with. it seem very unrealisitic.
you know you made dawn ooc. she would never in million years act with paul in such friendly manner if you continued the story on basis on anime she would be touchy or playful with. it seem very unrealisitic.
4/27/2021 c6
1Mike3000jr
So far i read pokemon x yugioh gx and now pokemon x food wars anything else youre going to mix cus if i see princess elsa im going to die laughing

So far i read pokemon x yugioh gx and now pokemon x food wars anything else youre going to mix cus if i see princess elsa im going to die laughing
4/26/2021 c3 Mike3000jr
I had my suspicions but this confirms it how the hell did you mix yugioh gx and pokemon AND make it work
I had my suspicions but this confirms it how the hell did you mix yugioh gx and pokemon AND make it work
2/14/2021 c11 Barun
Can you please continue the story ,its getting quite interesting
Can you please continue the story ,its getting quite interesting
9/2/2020 c10 Pokemon fan
Hey when you gonna upload
Hey when you gonna upload
11/30/2019 c8 thor94
good battle, and glad to see ash having the aura sphere riolu.
But when you will give him a legit keystone?
good battle, and glad to see ash having the aura sphere riolu.
But when you will give him a legit keystone?
11/30/2019 c6 thor94
a bit inconsistent.
If this story take place after ash differents journeys, no way kiawe can be ranked better than ash.
basically not a single of reccuring rival ash meet during his travels should be in the top10 rank (means morisson, barry, conway, paul, nando, cameron, trip, tierno, trevor, sawyer, kiawe, gladion and all alola school students should be out)
a bit inconsistent.
If this story take place after ash differents journeys, no way kiawe can be ranked better than ash.
basically not a single of reccuring rival ash meet during his travels should be in the top10 rank (means morisson, barry, conway, paul, nando, cameron, trip, tierno, trevor, sawyer, kiawe, gladion and all alola school students should be out)
8/3/2019 c4
10thunderofdeath97
ash beat brock ny using the sprinklers and no if pikachu had fought then he would have beaten misty so he might have got mistys out of pity but not brocks

ash beat brock ny using the sprinklers and no if pikachu had fought then he would have beaten misty so he might have got mistys out of pity but not brocks
6/20/2018 c5
9Lord Knight Shiren
The story is really good but maybe could you put "" marks where they speak and ' ' when they think.

The story is really good but maybe could you put "" marks where they speak and ' ' when they think.
2/18/2018 c5
1kurifu gari
This is interesting story so far. Makes me wish kinda that this was cannon, but oh well! By the way, loved the Yu-Gi-Oh gx and food wars references good animes lol. Will there perhaps be a reunion of all his traveling companions and old flames (as if he dense as a rock). May I also suggest a side pairing of bonniexmax sorry for the long ish review

This is interesting story so far. Makes me wish kinda that this was cannon, but oh well! By the way, loved the Yu-Gi-Oh gx and food wars references good animes lol. Will there perhaps be a reunion of all his traveling companions and old flames (as if he dense as a rock). May I also suggest a side pairing of bonniexmax sorry for the long ish review
1/1/2018 c2 Guest
The Kanto region, in a place known as Pallet Town is the home of Ash Ketchum. A Pokémon trainer whose dream is to become a Pokémon Master. Along with him is his faithful starter Pikachu.
Ash and Pikachu have traveled far and wide across multiple regions collecting gym badges to compete in each region's Pokémon League. During his travels he has come across many challenges, made many friends, faced many rivals along the way, like the grandson of the famous Professor Oak
Ash and Gary were facing off in a full battle in the Johto league Silver Conference. It was Gary's Blastoise vs Ash's Charizard.
"Charizard lift Blastoise up into the air!" Commanded Ash. Charizard let out a harsh roar, as it did as it was told and lifted Blastoise into the air.
"Bite him Blastoise!" Gary ordered.
Blastoise then bit Charizard's left shoulder causing it to grunt in pain.
"Charizard don't give in!" Ash encouraged. "Seismic Toss with everything you got!"
Charizard roared; continuing to fly higher into the air. Once high enough, it began to spherically spin, diving towards the ground in unmatched speeds.
"Blastoise!" Gary cried out, watching helplessly as the water starter was hit directly with full-force.
The two fell, crashing to the ground. The impact had caused the whole battlefield to be engulfed in smoke. The crowd looked on, anxiously waiting for the smoke to clear. Watching for any sign of movement. Slowly, the dust cleared, revealing both Blastoise and Charizard covered in scratches staring each other down. They stood in silence, a vow to keep standing. Stubbornly waiting for the other to fall; and then Blastoise stumbled, swaying to side before slumping to the ground. The referee waited, a pause. The time was up, the hard-shell pokemon was knocked out. Charizard was declared the winner, as the stadium erupted into cheers and applause.
(See any difference?)
The Kanto region, in a place known as Pallet Town is the home of Ash Ketchum. A Pokémon trainer whose dream is to become a Pokémon Master. Along with him is his faithful starter Pikachu.
Ash and Pikachu have traveled far and wide across multiple regions collecting gym badges to compete in each region's Pokémon League. During his travels he has come across many challenges, made many friends, faced many rivals along the way, like the grandson of the famous Professor Oak
Ash and Gary were facing off in a full battle in the Johto league Silver Conference. It was Gary's Blastoise vs Ash's Charizard.
"Charizard lift Blastoise up into the air!" Commanded Ash. Charizard let out a harsh roar, as it did as it was told and lifted Blastoise into the air.
"Bite him Blastoise!" Gary ordered.
Blastoise then bit Charizard's left shoulder causing it to grunt in pain.
"Charizard don't give in!" Ash encouraged. "Seismic Toss with everything you got!"
Charizard roared; continuing to fly higher into the air. Once high enough, it began to spherically spin, diving towards the ground in unmatched speeds.
"Blastoise!" Gary cried out, watching helplessly as the water starter was hit directly with full-force.
The two fell, crashing to the ground. The impact had caused the whole battlefield to be engulfed in smoke. The crowd looked on, anxiously waiting for the smoke to clear. Watching for any sign of movement. Slowly, the dust cleared, revealing both Blastoise and Charizard covered in scratches staring each other down. They stood in silence, a vow to keep standing. Stubbornly waiting for the other to fall; and then Blastoise stumbled, swaying to side before slumping to the ground. The referee waited, a pause. The time was up, the hard-shell pokemon was knocked out. Charizard was declared the winner, as the stadium erupted into cheers and applause.
(See any difference?)
1/1/2018 c5 thor94
good chapter.
pikachu is strong, buthope ash will get his keystone.
the speech obviously come from shokugeki no souma
good chapter.
pikachu is strong, buthope ash will get his keystone.
the speech obviously come from shokugeki no souma
1/1/2018 c3 thor94
good battle.
also hope you won't makethe same stupid mistake as anime writers and soon give ash keystone and megastone for him mega evolve charizard, sceptile, oniglali and future garchomps.
for oshawott, no way he could beat regigigas
good battle.
also hope you won't makethe same stupid mistake as anime writers and soon give ash keystone and megastone for him mega evolve charizard, sceptile, oniglali and future garchomps.
for oshawott, no way he could beat regigigas
9/30/2017 c5 Guest
Plz let it be my boy rockruff
Plz let it be my boy rockruff