for Lost Thoughts3/22/2003 c3 
11MelodyReiterLee
This is interesting, but could you please separate some more into paragraphs for the dialogue.
11MelodyReiterLeeThis is interesting, but could you please separate some more into paragraphs for the dialogue.
3/9/2003 c2 MelodyReiterLee
This is very interesting. Could you separate the parts when different people speak? Write more! Darn, chapter three hasn't shown up yet on the story. ^^;;
This is very interesting. Could you separate the parts when different people speak? Write more! Darn, chapter three hasn't shown up yet on the story. ^^;;
2/22/2003 c1 Waterwing-13
Hey! Can't wait ot read your other chapies! What's gonna happen to Serena? What do they see? Is it what I'm thinkin' about? WEll read ya' l8erz!
Hey! Can't wait ot read your other chapies! What's gonna happen to Serena? What do they see? Is it what I'm thinkin' about? WEll read ya' l8erz!