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11/28/2019 c1 Guest
huge applause to you for this one - for an unusual idea that was executed gracefully and poetically (especially when it it could've reached hentai levels of weird and twisted lol) strong imagery and a solid piece of work through and through.
i did notice from the start that you tried really hard to not repeat words, but sometimes in a story that's okay, as long as doesn't sound repetitive. don't let switching up vocabulary distract the reader from the beautiful story itself.
i can't believe that i just wrote such a serious review for this, but seriously, great job. you got the potential to write great stories.
9/27/2017 c1 59MirrorFlower and DarkWind
hmm very different and interesting I enjoyed it
9/22/2017 c1 17luckyinugirl
Would it be weird if I said it turned me on?
8/17/2017 c1 6Anguis Reginam
Oh was that was very hot! Thank you so muchj for posting
8/10/2017 c1 1serenityselena
a very interesting twist :)
8/4/2017 c1 Guest
I imagine this would be a quite amazing experience. Good job.
6/28/2017 c1 Bisque-Ware
This was very well written.
4/18/2017 c1 Rikusolo84
I love the idea of the ocean doing all the work like a hesitant lover but how is moana able to breath under the water?

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