for The Story of The Salamander12/24/2024 c3 Guest
Not every scene has to be at the hostess of feterility.
Not every scene has to be at the hostess of feterility.
10/22/2024 c3 Guest
All the characters feel so ooc. Hestia doesn't feel like the original hestia as well as many others. The writing is pretty bad as well. Elementary level english with standard grammar mistakes. A lot of super redundant words and sentences.
All the characters feel so ooc. Hestia doesn't feel like the original hestia as well as many others. The writing is pretty bad as well. Elementary level english with standard grammar mistakes. A lot of super redundant words and sentences.
9/23/2024 c13 Almighty Izuku
Amazing story so far I love it so much it’s so good I really can’t wait for more of the struts exe to unfold please update as soon as possible!
Amazing story so far I love it so much it’s so good I really can’t wait for more of the struts exe to unfold please update as soon as possible!
9/22/2024 c13 Guest
This is so interesting and awesome story. This is so great
This is so interesting and awesome story. This is so great
7/13/2024 c3 
12JensenDaniels32
You never let Natsu finish off his big challenges, author. Do you have something against him? Also, doru you espeaka Engrish? Lol.
12JensenDaniels32You never let Natsu finish off his big challenges, author. Do you have something against him? Also, doru you espeaka Engrish? Lol.
5/4/2024 c13 Guest
Danmachi story idea:
-Liliruca dies in the dungeon after being used as bait by some adventurers and is reborn in the modern world as Kashiwagi Rein from Darwin’s Game, where she proceeds to happily live her new life until she’s invited to the Darwin’s Game. Then, after dying as Rein she finds herself back in the dungeon in her original world to the moment right before her death.
Rein is a skilled sniper (which would pair well with the sigil Hinokagutsuchi) and leader (it would be interesting if she got Gaurdian of the World Branch as a skill and sigils became skills), and they’re both connected to Irish mythology as Lili is the reincarnation of Fianna and Rein is in possession of the sigil Gae Assail. Also, they both wear coats, though Lili’s clothes are all practically in tatters (the poor girl is in desperate need of new clothes).
Danmachi story idea:
-Liliruca dies in the dungeon after being used as bait by some adventurers and is reborn in the modern world as Kashiwagi Rein from Darwin’s Game, where she proceeds to happily live her new life until she’s invited to the Darwin’s Game. Then, after dying as Rein she finds herself back in the dungeon in her original world to the moment right before her death.
Rein is a skilled sniper (which would pair well with the sigil Hinokagutsuchi) and leader (it would be interesting if she got Gaurdian of the World Branch as a skill and sigils became skills), and they’re both connected to Irish mythology as Lili is the reincarnation of Fianna and Rein is in possession of the sigil Gae Assail. Also, they both wear coats, though Lili’s clothes are all practically in tatters (the poor girl is in desperate need of new clothes).
4/30/2024 c13 Guest
Please don’t make Lili part of the harem, it would be better for her self-esteem if she didn’t have to fight for the affection of her love interest. It’s more suitable for her become a loyal friend and comrade who grows for the sake of the people she comes to care about.
Please don’t make Lili part of the harem, it would be better for her self-esteem if she didn’t have to fight for the affection of her love interest. It’s more suitable for her become a loyal friend and comrade who grows for the sake of the people she comes to care about.
4/30/2024 c13 Guest
Danmachi story ideas:
-Child Emperor from One Punch Man reincarnates as Liliruca Arde. It would be a serious upgrade for her backpack.
Or Nami from One Piece, since their backstories are similar.
Maybe even Kashiwagi Rein from Darwin’s Game.
-Another idea would that Lili dies in the dungeon after being used as bait by some adventurer and is reborn in the modern world or another anime’s world, where she lives a happy and fulfilling life until she dies and finds herself back to her original world.
Danmachi story ideas:
-Child Emperor from One Punch Man reincarnates as Liliruca Arde. It would be a serious upgrade for her backpack.
Or Nami from One Piece, since their backstories are similar.
Maybe even Kashiwagi Rein from Darwin’s Game.
-Another idea would that Lili dies in the dungeon after being used as bait by some adventurer and is reborn in the modern world or another anime’s world, where she lives a happy and fulfilling life until she dies and finds herself back to her original world.
4/12/2024 c4 Pixie Duck
...
WHAT?
He fought literally a hord of monsters stronger than him to protect his goddess and passed his limitans he's still Level 1?
that doesn't make sense at all.
...
WHAT?
He fought literally a hord of monsters stronger than him to protect his goddess and passed his limitans he's still Level 1?
that doesn't make sense at all.