Reviews: The One That Got Away

7/15/2022 c1 Guest
Finish the fucking story, you piece of shit!

8/12/2020 c1 Pattsy1994
Great.

7/19/2020 c1 Obsessedreader83
Awesome story, like a multi chapter in one go lol. I really hope u continue this one.

5/13/2019 c1 TennesseeCaliforniaGuy
I hope you decide to add closure one day cause man, I just hate she ended up with his bother... then you kill him off... Making it so that edward takes his place as lover and father to Bella and the baby..

I just hate that shit man... Cause we know Edward is such a good man and deserves to be so much more then the fill in..

4/18/2018 c1 Rita01tx
Great start to what could evolve into an epic Mobward story!

3/19/2018 c1 alainaroullier
This is quite a story! Following!

2/4/2018 c1 gabby28
I really enjoyed this, would love a glimpse into the future of these three.

9/28/2017 c1

1my2galspal
Just reread this fic and remembered how much i liked it. Do you have plans to continue the story? If not, it's a great wrap up but I would love to know what happens next.

Thanks for sharing your story with the rest of us.

7/11/2017 c1 Fleur50
Woow!

Lu avec Google Translate. French. Montréal, Québec.

7/9/2017 c1 CSG
Well, at least he doesn't have to worry about her being in the dark about his family, now.

6/16/2017 c1 Godschildtweety
Nice job

6/6/2017 c1 princeselisa
Really enjoyed this story. Can't wait to read more!

5/5/2017 c1 Nannyjojo
Loved re reading this.
Would love to see it continued.
Find out if Bella and Edward could make a go of things.
What everyone would make of it.
Thank you for sharing.

4/27/2017 c1 Borntocontest
Brilliant story. Waiting to see it extended
Xxx

4/26/2017 c1 luvyateamedward
Great o/s! Can't wait to read more if you extend it.

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