for Cupboards and Cryogenics5/6 c78 Guest
Fun to read. Enjoyed the humor.
Fun to read. Enjoyed the humor.
3/31 c78 LazyLei
So happy to see this story have end last time I read this it's only 20 chapter it's really great unexpected yet still great.
So happy to see this story have end last time I read this it's only 20 chapter it's really great unexpected yet still great.
11/24/2023 c41 
8MythsterBlack
OK, I'm about 1/2 way through this story and as much as I like it, does Harry ever get any older than 4 years old? (grins) And why on Earth has Harry not asked Tony why he calls him Oliver? Unless I somehow missed that? Also, I am so brain tired of Harry's childish vocabulary, which is why I want him to GET OLDER! (grins) It's kind of like this story takes place over about a month or two, which it must be so, since Harry seems to be a permanent toddler. Anyway, very well written and thought out, not forgetting all the research you'd have had to do for some things. Anyway, onward to the last half now. Well done and (****) stars
8MythsterBlackOK, I'm about 1/2 way through this story and as much as I like it, does Harry ever get any older than 4 years old? (grins) And why on Earth has Harry not asked Tony why he calls him Oliver? Unless I somehow missed that? Also, I am so brain tired of Harry's childish vocabulary, which is why I want him to GET OLDER! (grins) It's kind of like this story takes place over about a month or two, which it must be so, since Harry seems to be a permanent toddler. Anyway, very well written and thought out, not forgetting all the research you'd have had to do for some things. Anyway, onward to the last half now. Well done and (****) stars
11/7/2023 c1 j4820
Great story, a very original plot. I thought your James/Bucky inner monologue was a brilliant idea and well done. Thanks for sharing your story.
Great story, a very original plot. I thought your James/Bucky inner monologue was a brilliant idea and well done. Thanks for sharing your story.
8/5/2023 c21 1Fanfic gyrl
So that scene where Tony Stark threw the arc-reactor, is also symbolic of RDJ throwing drugs away. I did not know that. Cool.
1Fanfic gyrlSo that scene where Tony Stark threw the arc-reactor, is also symbolic of RDJ throwing drugs away. I did not know that. Cool.
5/29/2023 c78 anon
ive read this story since it started and now i wish i hadnt wasted my time i stuck witht it thinking it was going somewhre, but this whole story just feels like boring filler, just if your going to write you know your story has to have a point or a heart and soul but this was just empty. find a soul for your story if it has no meaning it has no purpose
ive read this story since it started and now i wish i hadnt wasted my time i stuck witht it thinking it was going somewhre, but this whole story just feels like boring filler, just if your going to write you know your story has to have a point or a heart and soul but this was just empty. find a soul for your story if it has no meaning it has no purpose
5/4/2023 c1 2jormander2012
Haven't gotten far ill be honest but the concept interested me. there is a slight problem and it's nothing major just an observation really. the beginning starts out with the winter soldiers pov and you did a good job capturing the idea of a man devoid of most thought he was sent on a mission and all that mattered to him was the mission. that aspect was caught perfectly as it did in the movie. that being said in writing it doesn't translate well for some reason it kind of gives off a dull lifeless part. normally that's fine because it's in the middle of the story or after I've already been into the chapters the problem I see here is that this was your opening scene so some might not keep going after the first bit. I'm interested enough to keep going just for the fact u did do that bit so well but I'm a stickler kind of for details like that and you did top 5 I've honestly read. anyway hope the rest is just as well written but wanted to point that possible issue before I went to far on.
2jormander2012Haven't gotten far ill be honest but the concept interested me. there is a slight problem and it's nothing major just an observation really. the beginning starts out with the winter soldiers pov and you did a good job capturing the idea of a man devoid of most thought he was sent on a mission and all that mattered to him was the mission. that aspect was caught perfectly as it did in the movie. that being said in writing it doesn't translate well for some reason it kind of gives off a dull lifeless part. normally that's fine because it's in the middle of the story or after I've already been into the chapters the problem I see here is that this was your opening scene so some might not keep going after the first bit. I'm interested enough to keep going just for the fact u did do that bit so well but I'm a stickler kind of for details like that and you did top 5 I've honestly read. anyway hope the rest is just as well written but wanted to point that possible issue before I went to far on.
4/20/2023 c78 suziq968
This was all kinds of fun to read. I liked how you showed them working through all the trauma without spiraling into a total angst fest. Good balance of fluff, drama and action too. Also, super cute chibi Harry!
This was all kinds of fun to read. I liked how you showed them working through all the trauma without spiraling into a total angst fest. Good balance of fluff, drama and action too. Also, super cute chibi Harry!